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raigeki
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(this not the original story of last stand but since it doesn't tell its beginning i am going to make my own. screen shots used are last stand and pandemic 2)

Last Stand: The story

Chapter 1: It starts with "V"

Name is John Graham, 25 years old and i lived California U.S.A.

year is 2015

i am at my home watching television when something interrupted my show. it was a newsflash saying rumors about this kind of virus called "Venistraten Virus" or "V-Virus". it said that it is a kind of weapon Russia is using against the U.S spreading it killing millions to make U.S surrender and bring Russia to its power against the world again.

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But they are dead wrong. Russian specialists and military officers had been accidentally infected by the radiation of the virus. the worst is that the virus is transmitted not just by air but also trough water, insects, and rodents that the scientist experimented. the laboratory is ravaged by the death of hundreds inside. the Russian government takes the task of closing all of its border meaning nothing will go out until a vaccine is made in order to save mankind. a few days later the virus spread through out russia. one man escaped and escaped Russia using his private plane. he gets to America not knowing he is infected. thus after going in some hospital to be checked the doctors,nurses,patients,all of the people inside where also infected. in matter of few days all is going to be infected. including my town.

just my luck. when i was trying to escaped the city i have seen this incredible news. The international health authority just had sent the news that whole of America is infected

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United nations already closed Russia and the vaccine its using to cure the people. but in matter of days they will all die. same faith in the U.S. well in order to survive i will stay in my house. the virus has many symptoms if one has it. there is sneezing,coughing, etc or should we say the usual. but these gets worst and worst everytime i see people having these. it looks like that judgment day for america is near. another news spread through out the country saying the "V" is killing many of our people. thus security became tight.

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this ain't normal. no one is healthy?? but i am healthy. i think. not going out for a few days is paying enough for me not to get sick. but many had already died. as for Russia. it became a forsaken country and America is going to be next. weeks had passed. power is gone thus no more t.v for me. all of the transits, schools, ports, airports, even bus lines are gone. i had just known that in all of the days i am wasting in my house gives me enough to survive not knowing my fellowmen are already obliterated. we are just few in America. but luckily they are all californians.

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i have only a few days of supply. before my time runs out i have to get some. this time i met someone! good he is in good condition and has enough for us to get in a few weeks. we traveled to seek out survivors and we met a few. which died a few days & hours later. but the insanity didn't just begin there. there is these rumor that corpses are walking like ragdolls killing everything they seek. most likely those zombie movies i always watch. but this one is for real. and the best part is! we had encountered one but it is in an police station. my friend grabs me a glock pistol and begins to shoot the dude. but he is not alone. we run into a house in the middle of nowhere and barricade ourselves. "this is insane!" that is what he said. looks like this virus isn't just killing people. it brings them back to life. thus making my journey harder than what i expected.


-End of Chapter 1-

watch out for chapter 2: lost in the middle

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Madrox
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Fuc*ing awesome!
very nice story man!

raigeki
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Last Stand: The Story

LAST CHAPTER: The Last Stand

Day 17

3 more days since this. i motivated my men to be more brave and pray more so there will be a miracle. we wait for the whole day and at last nothing happened. my crew and i roam around just for fun and i let them get what they on the stores with edible and useful stuff. we raid this grocery store and get what we wanted. U.S.A has been forsaken a long time ago, i am just wandering where are those choppers and where is that place called "land of the humans". after being ridiculous on a store my men don't want to get back on the fortress yet. it is still morning and looks like the day is longer. we just roam free...... and yet we don't care about those freaking zombies. they grew in numbers while we can't find our numbers. no people, no survivor, just some bones that had been eaten by those murderous creatures. no animals or pets. just some dogs who are already infected. justin even created a poem while we marched on the road
"we are men who are obliged,
to fight what is was right.
though we are forgotten sake,
we will never be fake.

we are men who stand on their way,
to those zombies will not live for a day.
even if we are weary and exhausted,
we will fight until roeder is busted.

we are men who is just and might,
with guns so powerful it can smite
we will do our last stand now,
or 20 days will be just a bow.

He said for about 3 hours over and over again. he was stopped when we find this building full of things. we just get what we have to have and do what we have to do. so we came back and did the usual. more zombies came, more we burst head, more decapitated arms, more ammo we waste, more fun.

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Day 18

As much fun as yesterday. today is a meaningful day. we don't care if we are found or not. we just waste our very times getting happy. we had a arcade marathon. made those zombies as our target range. we even use bombs to see if those zombies explode and what was inside of them. it was disgusting but nice. after beating the hell off those freaks. i stated that we will leave the fortress and try to find the choppers at once.my men didn't agree. they will just stay here until dark. i told them that there is no chance of evacuating now if we didn't find the choppers. they said that someone would do. i have to agree with my man. i can't go alone again. i just hated to see these men die in combat when we are out. we debated for a whole day. and put the zombies at rest when the moon shines again. we just have to talk these over with tommorow.

Evo531
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Wow it really ties in with the game

raigeki
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well sorry for the delays again. i am thinkin what would be the next thing happen on the day 19 and day 20. you may give your ideas.

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Day 19

19 days and counting. every hours past and every sweat we lost are counted. we don't know what to do. we don't even hope on being saved. As the hours past we swept the village with zombies and get the last on what we had. I don't even know what to do. I filled in on the position on guarding the barricade today while my friends find us something useful. as usual it is very dangerous outside and the least thing we can do is hide as much as possible because of fear of losing much ammo that we need for the night. last night was intense that we almost lost all of what we got including our guts. We have to play the worst game ever that only our lives are at stake and we are not progressing at all. tomorrow is the day. If we live tomorrow we are going to find those choppers until we die. Hope that we are going to be save. Night is beginning. My men are ready. This is maybe the last night we are going to fight together. Those zombies kept their numbers largely increasing. as for us we stay what we are.

cowmaster1
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this is an awesome story based off an awesome game! you are a great story teller

TROJANS
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dude this an amazing story i never get bored of reading.keep on doing these types of stories

raigeki
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Finally the last chapter!!1


Day 20-act-1

This is it. as i speak and write my story my men are gathering all of what we can to survive this last day. We don't know how or when we are going to be saved. The only thing i knew is this the 20th day since we heard the news. it is dawn. I have a good feeling but i am not sure on what. Justin and I have to go out on the city to search for the choppers and signal them with our last box of flares. While Zanjoe and Luis are set to find as much supplies as they can. The rest are staying in the barricade and guarding the fortress to those zombies. We don't have much time on doing reckless doings and we don't have much strength to take a heavy horde of zombies on the road. As we go on to search for a high building there is this zombie horde going towards us and we can't do anything about it. We equiped our best weapons and shoot them until they die again and again. I used my hunting rifle while justin covered me in the front. i shot a zombie in the head and another one in the leg. Justin shot a zombie in the arm and another one in the head causing its brain exploding towards us. We have our moments in that time. As i was causing annihilation on the zombies there is another zombie horde on the back. Uh-oh we are in a heap of trouble. I planned an escape route causing to leave some of our supplies to reduce weight and speed up a little. we barricaded this small house and shoot the zombies until we ran out of ammo and luck. We had wasted alot of time in the building and we are starting to regain our guts again. Crossing the bloody mess we march to the highest building of all we can see. set the binocs and started the flare. we don't know what to do. We are already weary of this stuff and i want to rest. But as usual we can't and to think of the zombies are scarier than ever. This is a nightmare for us surviving this kind of gig.


to be continued...
cowmaster1
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hurry up and finish it

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[b]Day 20-Act-2[b]

Zanjoe and luis are gathering up and are going to venture the parks to look for signs and signals for the choppers. Before they do something stupid they must take responsibility of all zombies in the park first. When zanjoe had noticed the zombies they quickly run and shoot zombies as fast as they could. While running one of the zombies who is wearing a vest and 3 more on the back of it quickly chased them until they were exhausted. Weary and tired because of the weight of what they carry Zanjoe and Luis tried to fend off those who are chasing them. Luis with his revolver shoot the vested zombie but it seems it had no effect. Zanjoe on the other hand had taken care of the other 3. "This is not good" Luis said. "wee need more ammo and shoot that F****ng thing before become part of them" Zanjoe replied. "YOU idiot" Zanjoe shouted when luis accidentally broke the revolver. Without any weapons rather than a knife Luis and Zanjoe tried shooting the zombie before it is too late. Zanjoe could not hit any part execpt the legs. After the zombie had died again Zanjoe just lied down on the grass and stayed. Luis taking care of another handgun on his arm had gone to the comfort room to take his stomach to rest. After a while of goofing of they had to make it to the police station nearby to get any "help" or to get killed by more ravaging zombies. After a few hours of goofing off they had found nothing at all. Outside of the police station they saw this flash of light and smoke coming. Looks like John and Justin had made it to a building high enough to take the flares to the highest reach point for those choppers. They had gone back. It is turning to night and we need to get those zombies to rest. John and Justin came back with loads of ammo. This is our final night. Our final battle. Our Last stand.

~To be continued

(sorry for the delays. school is gone up wild and i have to do alot. i am going to finish this asap!)

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Day 20-Act-3

Night has already come. We prepared our gear and reloaded our weapon and full our stomach and take the bathroom because there are more zombies than we are facing. We had lost hope and we are sure that there will be no more choppers coming. I had prepared my rifle and laid my chainsaw down the barricade while my men get to their posts and fell the cold breeze flowing. Dead are lurking and the moon shines bright enough for us too see them devour their own kind. It is disgusting but we need to keep our disgusts away so we can focus as much possible. My clock strikes 6 and the sun is setting. After a few seconds of silence we heard this groan. "Rurrrrr!!!!" they were here. Zombies running towards us, we began shooting and slamming all zombies who goes to the barricade. I had shot a zombie in a head then reloaded. Justin and Zanjoe had gathered all of their fire power and shoot the zombies in the west wing while Luis and the rest are guarding the east wing while me guard the middle. Very loud shots and spills of fire and gunpowder our fight is like endless. An hour later and the zombies stop attacking. The dead bodies are like evaporating into thin air and it made us puke like we never puke before. After that peace here comes another batch! WE scream to the heavens and killed everything we see. Roeder who is always breaking my rules and seems to not get my intentions and never bothers to listen to me came out of the barricade trying to get out! I yelled at him and everybody had to to scream at him. Being an emo he run straight to zombies making him their meal. We tried to save him but he became one of them, i have nothing to lose he is an enemy and had to get rid of. I shot him in the head and the rest follows. We fought till our last of our ammo runs out. This is it. Dawn the sun is already spawning from its sleep and all of us are exhausted. Luis told me that there will be no more choppers and we need to get out of the city quick. But surviving for 20 days and we had already squeeze out everything edible around the city. We are doomed. After a few minutes of arguing we heard this noise. It sounds like a chopper. Do my eyes deceive me, am i hallucinating. NO!. it is a chopper! i can't believe my eyes that we are going to be saved! At last we are saved

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Inside the chopper we are talking and making fun of what we had experience on the last 20 days. battered and almost out of life we are greeted by the soldiers.

Luis asked me "Where from here john?"

I just answered "Who knows, It's a new day..."

Then we left what we had on the barricade...


~the end

raigeki
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Totally forgotten this
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Well hope you liked it.

to those who liked it thnx!!

and i am going to write a sequel if i had time on school.

it will be titled Last Stand 2:S.A.R.S(search and rescue squad)

ok.. thnx to all.

miguelin11
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lol I read the whole thread and who knew roeder was an EMOP? poor him

raigeki
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well there is an explanation to that.

recently the guy i based "roeder" became my enemy. and he also became my rival (we were once friends). Now he is out of my league and because i just said one bad word that is not even for him! he took it seriously. So i killed the the character. and because he is really an emo! he is 16 and had to put a real tattoo then after a few days he was regretting of it and now is going to get it off! I want his name to be written in a deathnote so he will be out of my life!

hehehe. sorry if i was angry in that!

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The orginal story of The last stand reminded me of a twofold zombie movie I saw a while ago
The first was''28 days later''
The second ''28 weeks later''
Very similar
In a way it's close to yours but aren't zombie stories all a little bit the same
Also,it's good.But nothing new.
Good effort,keep up the nice work

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