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Water
Flows down a river bed
Creeping up onto a turtles head
Silently dribbling down a waterfall
Majestically dancing with the rocks
It moves to the beat of the earth
Hard and fierce as a sharkâs tooth
Soft and light as a feather in the wind
Water into the ocean
Itâs a new song now
With a new beat
The beat of the moon
In the sky
Never moving
Playing it cool
Water rocking
Killer song
Killing in the water
Thrashing all about
The water is dead
And the tide is rising
The earth is angry
And it sings high and loud
Slapping noise on the shore
People join in the song
Screaming and running
Away from the earthâs
Song
The water floats to the heavens
Like a dove soaring in the sky
It leaves the earth
Itâs a new song now.
The water rests on Rainbow beams
And sits on clouds
Weightlessly singing a new song
Of peace
Dripping on farmers
Parched
Fields
Of
R
I
C
E
Dripping
Into
Closed
Minds
Splashing
Into
P
H
O
T
O
S
Dripping onto
Dying
Plants
That
Once
Were
Green
And giving hope to the world
Through sound.
Flows down a river bed
Creeping up onto a turtles head
Silently dribbling down a waterfall
Majestically dancing with the rocks
It moves to the beat of the earth
Hard and fierce as a sharkâs tooth
Soft and light as a feather in the wind;
W a t e r

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Hey you guys know my poem snowflake? I submitted it into my school newspaper, and I got inside word that they were talking a lot about it. It could get Published!

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its pretty good i liked it, had a nice flow. but maybe a little shorter

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its pretty good i liked it, had a nice flow. but maybe a little shorter

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Is your nickname Redundancy Redundancy man?

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