Wow that's a long one~ Good work, actually. I suggest you go take a look at the Art, Music, and Writing forum section, there are other Pivot animators, a tutorial thread with tutorials on various things, a few contests, amongst those the animation contest, where the current theme is stick figures. So if you wanna make something for that one, it could be fun.
P.S. I'm not a dude, though I guess it is kind of possible to call females 'dude'... :P