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jcat5150
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I wrote this myself
plz respond on my profile

THE FINAL
INSPECTION

The Marine stood and faced God,

Which must always come to pass.

He hoped his shoes were shining,

Just as brightly as his brass.

'Step forward now, Marine,

How shall I deal with you?

Have you always turned the other cheek?

To My Church have you been true?'

The soldier squared his shoulders and said,

'No, Lord, I guess I ain't.

Because those of us who carry guns,

Can't always be a saint.

I've had to work most Sundays,

And at times my talk was tough.

And sometimes I've been violent,

Because the world is awfully rough.

But, I never took a penny,

That wasn't mine to keep...

Though I worked a lot of overtime,

When the bills got just too steep.

And I never passed a cry for help,

Though at times I shook with fear.

And sometimes, God, forgive me,

I've wept unmanly tears.

I know I don't deserve a place,

Among the people here.

They never wanted me around,

Except to calm their fears

If you've a place for me here, Lord,

It needn't be so grand.

I never expected or had too much,

But if you don't, I'll understand.

There was a silence all around the throne,

Where the saints had often trod.

As the Marine waited quietly,

For the judgment of his God.

'Step forward now, you Marine,

You've borne your burdens well.

Walk peacefully on Heaven's streets,

You've done your time in Hell.'

It's the Soldier, not the reporter
Who has given us the freedom of the press.

It's the Soldier, not the poet,
Who has given us the freedom of speech.

It's the Soldier, not the politicians
That ensures our right to Life, Liberty and the Pursuit of Happiness.

It's the Soldier who salutes the flag,
Who serves beneath the flag,
And whose coffin is d***** by the flag.
THESE COLORS DON'T RUN

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Agent_86
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=..)
That's beautiful...

RaptorExx
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Farmer

Wow....that's really nice =O
...
*has no words to explain so just leaves it at that*

Ricador
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Shepherd

That is an amazing poem

Dude, you could make money off of that

Talo
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Nomad

they have a thread for this... it's not here.

Zophia
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Scribe

*moves it*

platinumfork
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Nomad

nice, very nice

skater_kid_who_pwns
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Blacksmith

Wow, man...lyou got some skill!

skater_kid_who_pwns
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Wait a minute. Guys, he didnt write this. i found the same poem, from a 2002 page. Here is the page, I am gonna have you banned for plagarisumm.

http://www.grunt.com/scuttlebutt/newsarchives/2002/jun_6.asp

thoadthetoad
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PLAGERISM!!!!
*beats with a tattlebat*
>:U

BVHdrummer
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YOU DIDN"T WRITE THAT!!!! I found it her

NoNameC68
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Shepherd

Those are both (yes both, 2 peoms) are great poems. To bad you didn't write them.

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