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Posted Feb 7, '09 at 3:05pm

Graham

Graham

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i was bored last night and was thinking of cool names for poems...
thought about a lilpad and the morning dew..

Oh lily pad why do you cry every morning?
Are you taking in all grievances
every heartache, people endlessly adorning
All man's knowledge going to waste
As the apocolypes comes giving us chase
You know none of this
yet you still cry
when the sun comes by

Is this happiness, rejoice, and love
or all a sham, a haox, a scam
Nature has no optimism so why should we?
Sitting by the fire, a dead oak tree
living in the moment, till the first cough
then you have Aids, and are floating aloft
you know nothing of this
and yet you still cry..
...every morning..
as the sun goes by

it was weird how that came to me...i have no idea what to call that

 

Posted Feb 8, '09 at 10:06am

skater_kid_who_pwns

skater_kid_who_pwns

4,304 posts

grahm, that was actually very good. Is the lily pad symolising something? Anyways, the part were it got AIDS made me 0_o but still very good.

 

Posted Feb 8, '09 at 1:30pm

Graham

Graham

6,414 posts

aids part was about living in the moment then before you know it your dead and are floating in heaven

idk what the lilypad symbolized i just thought of the morning dew

 

Posted Feb 8, '09 at 6:42pm

Graham

Graham

6,414 posts

Boredom:
Boredom Boredom Boredom
always stalking.. oh em gee
when i'm thinking of stuff
it creeps up on me
Boredoms a joke with no punch line
it's like a plague on food as we dine

Boredom Boredom...
will you ever leave me be?
then an emotion comes out
let it be happy and free..
until drawn back to the boredom chi...

 
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