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3 2019
Gamer4Lyfe
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Nomad

I have never been hunting here before. I've heard stories, but i was so curious.

Where am I? Am i lost?

I feel like i'm being watched.

I hear a snap.

I pull an arrow and look around.

I dont see anything, but i feel a presence.

I start to run, but i stumble.

I try to get up, but I see a shadow.

"Hello?" i plead.

"Hello." said a voice as a fell into a everlasting sleep.

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Gamer4Lyfe
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Nomad

lol my first. i guess its not too popular because it has been 3o minutes and i have gotten 3 views... *Cry*

crimsonblade55
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Shepherd

as a note just because its been 30 minutes without anyone viewing it does not mean it is unpopular.This is really just a slow time of the day,to be posting some sort of literature from what I can tell.I would suggest that you not make assessments on whether people like it or not until at least 24 hours after you have posted it.At least thats my take on it.Anyways let me see here...well I just read it and it was very....poetic in a way.It did not rhyme,but when I read it,it just seemed like every line could be read and could just roll off the tongue smoothly like many poems would,but it tells of a story of some sort and it feels quite vague on what is really going on.Overall it was interesting to me,to say the least.

Gamer4Lyfe
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Nomad

lol thanks. i got carried away....

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