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Mobyduck
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Yo-ho-ho
Yo-ho-ho

May the rum never end
May the pirates be free
For us no more sand
Only the blue o' the sea

Forever I've had to wander Dhows,Junks and Frigates
Sometimes I wonder
Where is my soul mate?
Sailing the seas she must be
Maybe a last goodbye from me?

This be no fairy tale
Is she lost at sea?
Got ate by a whale?
I beg to thee
Are you the one
Or is she forever gone?

Yo-ho-ho
Yo-ho-ho


Just a poem I wrote some time ago for someone I met. It is not good at all, mainly on the last part, but I liked the way it came out.

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thisisnotanalt
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thisisnotanalt
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It's not bad. It's decent, really. If you want more topics, you can steal some from my thread. (alt's assorted authorings.) Please post in it, my thread is lonely
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It's a fun pirate love poem, which is not a common topic, so kudos for that.

Mirage1
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Hmmm, quite good. Maybe a little cheesy though.

Mirage1
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Mirage1
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Excuse me, i read it again, and now it is really Cheesy. I lauph!

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