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Story
The world was once a peaceful place where all races lived together in peace and harmony helping each other in daily life until a group of monsters whom call themselves the "Soul Eaters" started to kill and devour everybody who stood in their way nobody dared to defy their law and order so one night many of their slaves planned an escape and managed to get away they made new homes in a far away land they chose their own King and formed a group called the S.E.A or Soul Eater Annihilators but one faithful day the Soul Eaters penetrated the walls of the city and killed and devoured everybody who escaped...

The Day before the Invasion
The Captain of the S.E.A named Fazz was sitting around in his quarters when he heard a sudden noise he took out his sword and ran towards the outside there he saw one of his soldiers Gregory...

Fazz:Gregory what's happening?
Gregory:Captain! The Soul Eaters have breached our defenses the others headed out to defend the citizens
Fazz:Well what are you waiting for soldier? Come on lets go!

And so the 2 sheathed theirs swords and ran outside warily looking for the soul eaters and citizens that may need their aid then they heard screams of terror and Fazz spotted it he unsheathed his sword and slashed the soul eater and split it into half allowing the citizens a safe escape but then somebody sneaked behind him and cast a spell on him knocking him unconscious everybody died except for him he was in a deep sleep the soul eaters hadn't noticed he was alive and left him in the burning village to live once more... But he couldn't accept the destruction of his village he vowed to destroy them...

End of Part 1

More to come! And if you don't like how i tell my stories bugger off.

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Very well father! XD

3 Days after the Invasion
3 days after the invasion Fazz wakes up in a forest just near the village to his surprise his village was burnt to the ground he looked around him he saw no living beings he looked around for his sword and find that it has been taken but his armor remained...

Fazz:Great, just great! How am i supposed to defend myself without a weapon?!

Fazz looked around himself even the trees were burned down everywhere he looked there was a chaotic landscape in front of him after looking for a while he managed to find a rusty sword

Fazz:This should do for now i can't be choosy the soul eaters might still be nearby...

Fazz sheathed the rusty sword and looked around his surroundings he could find no sign of life the sight of this made him shudder but everywhere he looked there were no soul eaters they had been long gone he then realized his stomach growling he hadn't realized he had survived but not eaten for days! He looked around and found an apple he quickly munched on it and threw the apple core away he went on his way and started walking away from his village this was the place he had grown in the place he had defended all his life, now he was walking away from it... After a while the village was out of sight the lush and beautiful landscape had returned he looked down his feet and found a piece of rope lying around

Fazz:Hmm... This could be useful I'll just take it then!

He put the rope in his backpack and continued into the forest where immediately he saw an orange tree he climbed up and grabbed an orange and quickly peeled it and then ate it he continued until he encountered a grizzly bear it looked ferocious and also hungry he took out the rusty sword he had picked up and slashed it in the face the bear quickly reacted and tried swiping Fazz but managed to dodge it and stabbed the bear in quick succession 3 times until it finally died he reached the end of the forest and he spotted a village in the clearing he knew there was hope for him yet...

End of Part 1

Even more to come and there you happy? Slow enough for you? Detailed enough for you?

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Finding Refuge
Fazz knew that he was probably a wanted man when the Soul Eaters hadn't found his body he needed to find refuge and to lay low for a while he entered the city sneaking past the gate guards he then saw a small run-down shack it was perfect he quickly sneaked into it and closed the door there he saw a small bed and a square table with 4 seats but it was all dusty, so he knew what he had to do... Clean! He grabbed a broomstick from the back of the room and started cleaning after a while the shack was sparkling clean!

Fazz:Finally I'm done! All that hard work really payed off!

The whole shack was now gleaming the bed had been cleaned and the table and chairs were now sparkling the windows were no longer covered with dust and he knew he could live here for a while... He grabbed a cloak from the bag of the room and threw it over his head to make sure he wouldn't be seen he only had a small bag of gold it would be enough to last him for a while...

End of Part 3

Sorry for the confusion of the last one! It meant to say "End of Part 2" not "End of Part 1!"

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Cheap Furniture
Fazz also knew that the whole Bed and Table with 4 Chairs would soon bore him to his demise so he went to a garage sale with his cloak over his head he had 100 Gold Pieces that he earned from working and he could use it to buy some furniture he found a nice sofa that was only 20 Gold Pieces so he had to buy it and he did so he took it home and sat down he still had 80 Gold Pieces left he decided to use this to buy a new weapon he went to the weapon shop and found a nice Long Sword it had a ruby on the middle of the hilt and it was razor sharp and looked light weight the shop keeper had offered it to him for 50 Gold Pieces he took the Long Sword and threw his Rusty Sword into the trash bin for some other person to pick up, he still had 30 Gold Pieces so he used 15 of them to buy some food and saved the rest in-case he saw something, he soon got tired and went home and sat on his sofa. Very soon he was sleeping like a baby on it, for it was unusually slightly comfier than the bed...

End of Part 4

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The Soul Eaters Strike
Our hero Fazz wakes up on the couch and realizes that he had fallen asleep then he heard some screams of terror from outside the shack he took out his cloak and threw it over his head,grabbed his sword,and ran outside as fast as his feet would take him, then he saw what was making all the commotion 3 Soul Eaters have breached the town's defenses and the villagers were now defenseless against them he took out his Long Sword and struck a Soul Eater and cut it in half a Soul Eater started flying towards him and scratched his face with it's sharp claws he retaliated by stabbing it 3 times in succession the other Soul Eater was slowly advancing onto 3 helpless villagers this Soul Eater was 2 times bigger than the average ones he jumped high into the air and struck it with his blade but it wasn't finished just yet it muttered some words and a ball of fire came hurdling towards Fazz hitting him clean in the chest this was one of his toughest enemies yet he drew his blade and struck it once more but this time the Soul Eater had parried his attack with it's metal looking arm and threw him away colliding with the wall of a house, he stood up he hardly even knew what he could do right now he held his Sword high towards the air and muttered some words and struck with his blade a cutting edged wind was now racing towards the Soul Eater and cut it in half and then all the dead Soul Eaters disappeared into the darkness, all of the townspeople including the King himself thanked him for his courage and bravery but it wasn't over yet because Soul Eaters were known to send more of them if the original ones were killed...

End of Part 5

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nice one...
try to give a few more details to the story like yioup said

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The Soul Eater Invasion
The whole town knew that the Soul Eaters were going to send more Soul Eaters to kill them so they got their soldiers and hired lots of mercenaries to help fend off the incoming Soul Eater Invasion they also asked for the aid of our hero Fazz, and he gladly accepted to help them they had given him a Bow and Arrows to help him fend them off they had also given him a Shield to defend himself with after a few hours 5000 troops had gathered outside the city to defend it and after a few minutes 10,000 Soul Eaters were slowly making their way towards the city, to help aid their defense some master carpenters had built towers around the city to defend it, all the Soldiers then charged towards the Soul Eaters blood splattered everywhere,many swords were dirtied with blood,and already 200 Casualties were suffered by the army but they fought on, Fazz was doing well he hacked and slashed his way through the waves of Soul Eaters defending from their cold claws with his Shield throwing them off, his fellow soldiers were right next to him doing the same thing and soon Catapults were being pushed towards the Soul Eaters shooting flaming boulders at them dealing heavy damage lots of moaning and groaning have been heard from the Soul Eaters they weren't giving up anytime soon but the Army wasn't giving up too, they kept fighting to defend their homeland, they would not let some Undead scum destroy their homeland they continued fighting many died defending the city...

End of Part 6

Next part will come tomorrow!

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