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Fabian's Soul: The Unwanted and Lonely

Posted Mar 26, '09 at 7:32am

nichodemus

nichodemus

3,265 posts

Iron - Prince

Since thisnotalt( pretty sure I got the spelling wrong) suggested it, I think I will create a thread just to post my stories. Ok now to find them... *Digs deep into the AMW Section to find his stories*

Posted Mar 26, '09 at 7:38am

kingryan

kingryan

3,239 posts

Iron - Princess

Your stories thread seems kinda bare,
Find the stories is like looking on a bald mans head for a hair.

I can't wait to read what you will post,
Stories of Mystery and Terror at most!

 

Posted Mar 26, '09 at 7:40am

nichodemus

nichodemus

3,265 posts

Iron - Prince

Aha! Finally found one of them.

[/b]~~Berry Pomeroy Castle~~[b]

The freezing wind swept up the dry fallen leaves, rustling them along the path as the young doctor stepped off the carriage. Tipping his top hat to the driver, he pulled his overcoat around him and walked towards the ancient looking castle. The moon was bright in the night sky.

Watching the man disappear down the stone path, the wizened old driver sighed.'May the heavens protect you in that accursed place.' he muttered, urging the horse forward.
Doctor Feraz gripped the rusty iron ring on the door. Pulling it, he heard the sound of a cracked bell ringing a solemn note deep inside castle. The great wooden door creaked as the castle steward opened it. Bowing slightly, the doctor entered into the darkness, taking off his coat and hat. His eyes adjusted to the gloomy candle lit corridor quickly.

'Thanks for coming at this time of night Doctor Feraz.' the castle steward uttered anxiously. He led the way down the damp corridor. Doctor Feraz was amazed at the place, even more so at the numerous massive portraits hanging on the wall that seemed to glance coldly at him.

'You must have an army of people just to keep Berry Pomeroy Castle clean for His Lordship Mr Harris!' Feraz exclaimed, surprised.

'I suppose the damp keeps them away at this time of year! No wonder his Lordship likes to spend the winter in France.'

'Aye. But none will stay the night and it's not the damp that keeps them away.' The castle steward answered through a mouth of rotten teeth, hastily shuffling along.

Just then, the doctor stopped abruptly. At one point, the line of portraits broke off, leaving just a damp imprint of one. As he opened his mouth to inquire about the missing picture, the castle steward tugged him along quickly.
In the castle steward's room, his wife lay on her sickbed, pale and shivering. Doctor Feraz opened his black leather bag and started to examine her...

'She'll be fine, it's just a severe case of influenza, and she's recovering already. I gave her a sleeping draught to pass the night.' Feraz said, stepping out into the chilly night. The castle door shut behind him...

The next day, Feraz again arrived at the castle. This time a country girl answered the door.

'Mr Harris is out; you'll have to wait Sir.' She squeaked timidly. 

'Not a problem, I'll just stay in Lord Ruthven's library. If anything's wrong call me.'

The library was dusty; no one had entered for quite awhile. Rows and rows of shelves with books untouched for ages stood there. Weak rays of light shone in through the windows. Feraz picked up an old medical journal and lowered himself onto a dusty plum colored armchair.

As the afternoon went by, dark clouds swarmed the skies; a storm brewed, showering the castle's towers and battlements with torrents of icy rain. Thunder rocked the sky like cannon on a battlefield; lightning seemed to cross bright swords with each other. Feraz remained engrossed...

The ancient grandfather clock struck a somber note.
Startled Feraz arose from his reading and sat up. As he did so, he saw a woman gliding across the shelves. A pure white gown trailed behind her, ancient design on her dress. From her dress, he guessed it was in fashion 400 years ago.

'Excuse me madam.'  He stood up. 'Nice to...' The lady ignored him, silently continuing to move towards a flight of steps at a corner. As she past one of the windows, a flash of lightning lighted up her face. Feraz gasped. Her beautiful pale face was wracked in anguish, anger, sadness. But her eyes frightened him the most. They were steel grey, no soul behind them. A dead person's eyes. A tortured being. There was a dark stain forming on the dress. Blood dripped from her mouth's corners.

She continued noiselessly, at one point passing within a few feet of the shocked doctor. Still she gave no sign of seeing him. The only sound in the room was the swishing of her dress. He felt a cold breath play across his face. A bead of sweat dripped to the floor, Feraz's mouth twitched. As the woman reached the top of the stairs, she turned around a corner and disappeared.

Feraz straightened his tie, exited the library hurriedly and went to the castle steward. He found him in one of the billiard rooms, dusting the poolsticks.

'A party. Yes, has His Lordship been hosting a fancy dress party?' Feraz mumbled weakly, licking his dry lips.

'No sir, it's been some years since His Lordship held a party at Berry Pomeroy Castle...Are you alright doctor?'
'Then who was that lady in the old dress in the library? She looked so miserable...'

The steward turned ashen-faced, teeth chattering. He collapsed into an armchair, hands turning bone white. 'Oh my poor Isabel!' he wailed.

'Your wife? No that wasn't your wife I saw!'

The old man's eyes were washed with tears. 'I mean my wife will die. The thing you saw is the phantom of the castle. She led a sinful life in this castle 400 years ago. During the English Civil War, His Lordship's ancestor had supported the King. As the Parliament's troops attacked this castle, the woman led the enemy in. Years later, when the King returned, she was executed by His Lordship's ancestor. Her tongue was cut out for the crime of betrayal and she was burned at stake. She was doomed to wander the castle forever. Her's was the portrait that was removed and destroyed.'

'But what has this got to do with your wife?'

Old Harris brushed his tears away, looking at the young man. 'She only appears when there is a death in the castle.'

Feraz jumped to his feet, opening the door. 'But your wife is fine! She's in no danger!' he called as he rushed up the stairs, three at a time.

When he reached the bedroom door, he cleared it clumsily, stumbling to the woman's bed. He touched her icy hand. The woman lay peacefully beneath the sheets. Nothing moved in the room. But forever, Doctor Feraz swore he heard the soft rustling of a silk dress...

 

Posted Mar 26, '09 at 7:42am

nichodemus

nichodemus

3,265 posts

Iron - Prince

It was bare as a vulture's head because I was looking for them. Now it isn't haha! Dang, the bolding got screwed!

 

Posted Mar 26, '09 at 7:53am

knight_34

knight_34

3,503 posts

Wood - Prince

You still have two stories left. Go and *coughing* find them.

 

Posted Mar 26, '09 at 9:14am

nichodemus

nichodemus

3,265 posts

Iron - Prince

Well, this is my second one.

[/b][/i]~~The Bagpiper~~[i][b]

The high pitched sound emanated from the bagpipe the young lad squeezed nervously. Baron Ogilvy reclined in his ornate chair, nodding his head, a subtle smile forming on his face. Pure blissful bagpipe notes, something the foolish English would never understand.

'Well Skelton, you can take Bailiff's post of piper. Insolent man could never play such a fine tune.' the great grey-bearded Lord bellowed in his commanding voice. 'Arundel see to his sleeping quarters.' he said, turning to his Castle Steward.

'Yes your Lordship.' Arundel muttered sullenly.

Skelton felt excited, elated. Finally he had procured the job. As he left the magnificent red carpeted Grand Hall, he slipped off, heading towards the Castle's massive entrance. As the shallow-faced youth ran to nearby Harwick Town, the castle's battlements seemed to frown sternly at him...

The thick tobacco smoke hit Skelton's nose like a cannonball as he entered the tavern. Intoxicating. The Pilgrim's Sickle--a place for all sorts of smugglers, thieves, cheats and murderers to gather.  You could buy a man's death here it was said.

A dark hooded man signaled at him with a gauntlet clad hand. Skelton scurried over, nimble as ever. 'Have you gotten the job?' the man whispered with a thick Yorkshire accent, aquamarine eyes darting around. Skelton sat down on a stool unhurriedly.

'Yes.'.

The man's eyes glinted with joy, the gauntlet hand swiftly withdrawing into the dark depths of his robe. 'Excellent, the Duke would certainly be pleased. Now for you to gain Ogilvy's absolute trust. This is the plan...'

From that day on, Baron Ogilvy would often ask Skelton to play his bagpipe. Day and night, the sharp notes would hover over Berkeley Castle. The Baron was contented and so was Skelton. But the Baron had made many bitter enemies over the years, including the powerful Northern English nobles...

The cannon roared and ripped chunks of stone from the castle. The neighing of horses and clash of claymores against swords drowned out the shouts of men being struck down. Berkeley Castle was under siege.

'Hah, the pathetic English will never defile Berkeley Castle!' Ogilvy snorted heatedly. 'Let the Duke of Northumberland try all he wants! These walls built by my ancestors will never crumble!'

Once nightfall came, as the smoke twirled lazily from the English camp, Skelton crept softly up to the highest tower in the castle, bagpipe in hand. Looking down at the hard unforgiving bed of limestone at the foot of the castle, he began to blow his bagpipe... The change of guards was
beginning...

The English, hearing the sought after signal, took to arms and rushed at the castle. With their iron rams, they battered down the oak door reinforced with wooden beams. Screaming, they charged in, massacring defenders. Arundel, hearing this counterattacked; scores of grim leather-armored men with cruel knives following his orders. The English for all their preparedness had forsaken their armor to accomplish a quick strike. Skelton's malevolent line of a smirk faded, eyes widening in horror. Suddenly he felt a gloved hand clamp down on his mouth, a great mace descended. Darkness followed...

The next day, as the English host fled, bloodied and panicking, Ogilvy famous for his Latin temper had the piper brought before him from his cell.

'Arundel! Dispose of this filthy traitor!' the Baron screamed, white foam frothing at his mouth, shaking with rage.

'As you wish my Lord. Guards!'

Bright knives flashed in the light, striking the piper's wrists, biting into them like voracious wolves, piercing the terrified Skelton's arms. The blood flowed plentifully in two rivers from the stumps where the piper's hands were, staining the crimson carpet. Guards grabbed him, roughly carrying him up to the tower where he had played his final tune...

'So you really love to play the bagpipe do you?' Ogilvy hissed. 'Well now you can forever!' The young piper shrieked as he was flung down the battlements, the ground rushing up at a terrific speed...
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'Aye my lad so that was the story the Baron told us happened 600 years ago.' The foreman growled. 'If you ask me it's all hogwash, something Ogilvy just conjured up.'
Marshston, the new worker nodded. The renovation on the castle was in its critical stages, he just wanted to get home, let alone learn some useless history of this godforsaken hellhole of a place.

'Right boys, let's get down to business.' Gaidar the foreman spat, pulling on his red glove. Ever so proud of it Gaidar was. Rumor had it he had filled it up with Vaseline to keep his hand soft.

'Get started,less that old crackpot of a Baron starts complaining again!'

Marshston quickly started up his jackhammer, pounding the stone floors with it. 'Stupid story.' he thought; it gave him the creeps. Just then, a loud cry was heard from the kitchen. 'Gaidarrrrrr!'

'Alright which one of you young weaklings shouted!' Gaidar roared. He stormed into the kitchen and Marshston followed, curious as a cat. One of the welders was pointing to an old iron box, rusty, heavy and half buried in a hole. Gaidar grabbed it abruptly and went off...
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That night, when the ten men returned to the rooms the Baron allowed them to sleep in, wet with sweat, they saw Gaidar forcing the box open with a wrench. Panting with the effort he finally did so. 'Let's see what this old box holds.' he laughed, revealing a toothy grin. Surprisingly, it opened smoothly, as though someone had oiled its hinges recently.

'The Heavens above!' Gaidar exclaimed. Marshston peered in. What he saw almost gave him a heart attack. Inside were two skeletal hands, cracked with age, thin cobwebs between the fingers.

'Well that was quite a find I say! So the Baron must be telling the truth!' Gaidar admitted, beaten down for once. 'Guess I'll just keep it here till he comes tomorrow.'
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The fire crackled merrily as it ate up the wooden logs tossed inside the stone hearth. Gaidar, Marshston and the other construction men sat around the room, playing poker, swilling bottles of beer. Rock music pumped out from the battered battery power radio nearby.

An hour crawled by, then another...

At midnight the men were exhausted, counting their winnings or cursing their ill luck. Without warning, there came a shrill melody from the radio, cutting into the song being played. 'What the!' Gaidar uttered.

The sound was horrible, it sounded like a hundred nails on a whiteboard. Like the cry of a newborn cat. The sound of a bagpipe. The radio distorted it further. Some of the men quickly stuffed their fingers into their ears. Not the beetroot faced Gaidar though.

'Darn radio!' He slapped it hard. Still no change. Pressing the off button, he expected silence. The radio defied him. Snarling with annoyance, he ripped out the batteries and hurled it to the side. Still the sound continued, the radio seemed to mock his every move, the sound's pitch getting higher and higher.

Marshston was spooked by now. What was making that awful unearthly bagpipe sound?

Crackle! The room was plunged into pitch darkness as the fire mysteriously went out. There wasn't even a draught in the room. The men were quite by their sides now. The temperature plummeted, to a freezing cold. The men's breath came out in white puffs. Ice crystals crawled up the windows slowly. This was ridiculous! It was still summertime!

A blue glow shone at the center of the room, just like will-o-the-wisp, right where the box was. To Marshston's horror, the hands were twitching madly in the iron box, crawling about the box like two pale crabs. Black tatters of flesh appeared seemingly out of thin air on the flailing fingers. As he watched, the flesh turned to soil-brown, then with one last flop they turned to a healthy beige colour, the turquoise veins visible on them, fresh and bathed in the eerie flickering blue.

A blurred smoke-like humanoid figure slowly started taking shape. A tartan patterned bagpipe hung at its side. Marshston gasped with fright, heart palpitating. It had no hands! The men were rooted to the ground, paralyzed. 

A crystal ashtray suddenly shot across the room, straight through the figure, shattering into a million shiny pieces on the wall. Gaidar stood jaw agape, his throw had done nothing...

The phantom floated to the box, the horrible hands floating up to meet their master at last. It was at that moment that Marshston collapsed, the sight too much for him, the sad bagpipe tune echoing in his ears...

The next day when the Baron arrived, he found an empty castle; the room where the men stayed was empty, the oak door swinging on its creaky hinges. In the old iron box he saw on the table laid ten pairs of skeletal hands, one of them with a red glove...Revenge...

 

Posted Mar 26, '09 at 9:16am

nichodemus

nichodemus

3,265 posts

Iron - Prince

Grah! The bolding doesn't work! On the bright side, no funny symbols. Hope this bolding works. If not.... *Takes out gun*

 

Posted Mar 26, '09 at 9:18am

thisisnotanalt

thisisnotanalt

6,154 posts

Wood - Queen

Just highlight the text you want bold, and click the bold button. 
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Believe me, doing this will make everything easier to keep track of!

 

Posted Mar 26, '09 at 9:24am

nichodemus

nichodemus

3,265 posts

Iron - Prince

Oh dang, I wrote your name wrongly. Sorry! Just to try bolding, cuase I can't seem to get at it.

DANG

 

Posted Mar 26, '09 at 9:27am

knight_34

knight_34

3,503 posts

Wood - Prince

I see you are doing something wrong, nichodemus.

[?b] [?i] This is sample text [/b?] [/i?]

Remove the question marks and you get this -

This is sample text

I guess you have realized this by now but you only use the / symbol to close a tag.

Follow what alt said. If you want to include both italics and bold then highlight the desired text and press bold, then highlight the desired text again and press italic. Simple.

 

Posted Mar 26, '09 at 9:32am

thisisnotanalt

thisisnotanalt

6,154 posts

Wood - Queen

Bah, it's okay.  But for future reference, I answer to alt.

 
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