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Posted Mar 28, '09 at 12:28pm

nichodemus

nichodemus

13,580 posts

Knight

Dang, I sure take a longggg time on GA II. But hopefully, it should be done tomorrow. I want to take part in Thoad's competition.

 

Posted Mar 30, '09 at 8:53am

knight_34

knight_34

14,235 posts

Tomorrow then? I shall return by the time GA II is posted.

 

Posted Mar 30, '09 at 8:58am

knight_34

knight_34

14,235 posts

Argghh.. I forgot what day it is today! (Where is GA II?)

 

Posted Mar 30, '09 at 9:05am

alt_account

alt_account

286 posts

wow, I never thought I'd read the whole "guardian angel" story it was amamzing! and I hate to read I tell you.

 

Posted Mar 30, '09 at 11:40am

nichodemus

nichodemus

13,580 posts

Knight

Ok I feel bad for breaking promises to you guys, maybe I'll post a teaser.

 

Posted Mar 31, '09 at 8:47am

miguelin11

miguelin11

3,128 posts

hey nich, Sorry if I just read your story now haven't had time great story btw

 

Posted Mar 31, '09 at 8:51am

knight_34

knight_34

14,235 posts

Ok I feel bad for breaking promises to you guys, maybe I'll post a teaser.


It's okay. Take your time with the teaser. I will not die waiting.
 

Posted Mar 31, '09 at 12:00pm

titanium_man

titanium_man

53 posts

Wow! You have a lot of talent! I can compare your short stories to ones in other books, and your stories could fit right in with them! Your stories are those of a seasoned author, except for a few things, like some adjectives... and sometimes a sentence goes a bit too long. But other than that, this is professional writing!

 

Posted Mar 31, '09 at 12:03pm

titanium_man

titanium_man

53 posts

Oh, and I can't wait for GA II! *sorry for spamming, I could have put it on the last post* There isn't any pressure on you though, man. Take your time.

 

Posted Mar 31, '09 at 12:10pm

thisisnotanalt

thisisnotanalt

10,086 posts

Yes, these are all great. Some of the adjectives in GA are a bit clumsy, sort of like small bumps in the road, but still, to go by rating, GA gets a 9.5/10!

 
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