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Posted May 4, '09 at 11:46am

jezz

jezz

3,394 posts

Wow! Ive only just read your 3 stories. I liked Berry Pomeroy Castle the most. But I really can't wait for GA II!
I dont often read stories on AG. After a while my eyes begin to hurt :P
But I couldn't stop reading yours for a second.

 

Posted May 4, '09 at 11:47am

nichodemus

nichodemus

13,574 posts

Knight

Wow! Ive only just read your 3 stories. I liked Berry Pomeroy Castle the most. But I really can't wait for GA II!
I dont often read stories on AG. After a while my eyes begin to hurt :P
But I couldn't stop reading yours for a second.


Haha, thanks. I've been procrastinating for a long time now...
 

Posted May 4, '09 at 12:00pm

jezz

jezz

3,394 posts

Ahh. I do that all the time. I'll probably do that with the NES Story. I really shouldn't...
*gets to writing part 3 of the NES*

 

Posted May 5, '09 at 10:11am

nichodemus

nichodemus

13,574 posts

Knight

Ahh. I do that all the time. I'll probably do that with the NES Story. I really shouldn't...
*gets to writing part 3 of the NES*


Me too...Just that homework is swamping me. On the bright side, I'm tempted to write a GAIII and not cut off the series.
 

Posted May 29, '09 at 7:43am

nichodemus

nichodemus

13,574 posts

Knight

Finally I have another piece to add to my works! Enter my first poem entry here!

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A Werewolf and the Moon

Staring woefully at Her,
I sit listlessly downing the bitter liquor.
She calls to me a silent siren,
More entrancing than Lord Byron.

The blood-red Moon she signals to me,
Desperate I struggle to break free.
These iron chains bind me to a curse,
Condemned to an eternal thirst.

The clock strikes a sinister twelve,
Into a Feral hell I know I must delve.
My soul it trembles and shrivels,
An ancient battle of accursed devils.

My primal instincts grow stronger.
My mind is possessed human no longer.
My resistance crumbles and shatters asunder.
My body intend on vicious murder.

The Brethren call for me,
Only they hold the Cure and Key.
Whither shall I painfully go?
To treat them as friend or foe?

The dreaded fur pierces as I falter,
My pupils widen, their colours alter.
The Human in me is finally dead,
The emotions in my eyes ominously fade.

The Moon's silvery tones and voice,
Cruelly drain me of my own choice.
I cannot restrain the overwhelming tide,
The Wolf in me stirs where it resides.

I tear and rip at my chest,
Nothing can behold me I withstood Time's Test.
The hot saliva coats my long teeth,
I crave the Holy Waters of the Church's priest.

My limbs lengthen; I walk on all fours,
As I smash through the magnificent oak doors.
Snarling I spit vehemently on the fields,
Graveyard of my merciless kills.

The Moon controls me like a marionette,
It has all been a glittery masquerade.
My hunger knows no bounds,
My razor claws rake at the grounds.

A faithful servant of darkness,
Patter of heavy feet in the forest.
Twin crimson spots flit at the flimsy gate,
Cloaked in malevolence and pure hatred.

I howl aimlessly for my true brothers,
Shunning all the others.
My mournful cry rocks everyone to the core,
Wild splashing of blood and gore.

People bolt their wooden houses,
Lowering already hush whispers.
My name speaks of dread and despair,
One of Nature's ruthless Corsairs.

Cold winds ripples my hide,
None but the Moon as a guide.
A shapeless shadow silently running,
Mouth agape, tongue hanging.

Hated and feared creature of the night,
I am the Infernal Blight.
Without a thought I stalk and slaughter,
Amidst the crunching of bone and hyena laughter.

I am more than a terrifying nightmare,
To challenge me none will dare.
My bite carries the Curse,
Wallowing in decay fully immersed.

The Moon how she torments me on the rack,
To lie bloated on the essence of the infected.
Vile and immortal desecrator of tombs.
A Werewolf and the Moon.

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Hope you enjoyed it!

 

Posted May 29, '09 at 8:31am

napolian654321

napolian654321

964 posts

Wow, nice job!

 

Posted May 29, '09 at 8:42am

jezz

jezz

3,394 posts

Wowww.

You seriously wrote that?
It's amazing.
And totally fitting :3

 

Posted May 29, '09 at 8:45am

nichodemus

nichodemus

13,574 posts

Knight

Yes, I totally wrote that. Four hundred words in two hours. Sweet...It was extremely fun writing, finding fitting words that could rhyme and move the poem along....

Hoooowwwwlllll!!

Lycan of AG

 

Posted May 29, '09 at 8:49am

jezz

jezz

3,394 posts

Aww my little furry friend, I loved it!

"The blood-red Moon she signals to me,
Desperate I struggle to break free.
These iron chains bind me to a curse,
Condemned to an eternal thirst. "

and

"My limbs lengthen; I walk on all fours,
As I smash through the magnificent oak doors.
Snarling I spit vehemently on the fields,
Graveyard of my merciless kills. "

are my favourite.

 

Posted May 29, '09 at 8:52am

miguelin11

miguelin11

3,128 posts

I wish I could wtite a poem... :*(

 
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