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Posted Jun 4, '09 at 9:25pm

Maverick4

Maverick4

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Mea Culpa


YES! finnaly somebody worthy enough to know latin! woot!

...erm...
 

Posted Jun 5, '09 at 3:00am

DDX

DDX

3,670 posts

beautifully written, that wolf poem.

 

Posted Jun 10, '09 at 6:28am

nichodemus

nichodemus

13,696 posts

Knight

Aha......

GA II is finally done! Some...actually one lucky person got a sneak peek. I'll add some little bits, and cut off some parts.

So tune in for more!

 

Posted Jun 10, '09 at 6:45am

jezz

jezz

3,394 posts

=D
Shall I say...?
Erp.. *shines*
Can't wait for teh next part

 

Posted Jun 10, '09 at 7:54am

nichodemus

nichodemus

13,696 posts

Knight

No jess! Don't reveal it....


Can't wait for teh next part


It's not confirmed yet. Though after reading 'Nineteen Eighty-Four' I feel like carrying on....

And reverse history, to create a Fascistic Dysopia.
 

Posted Jun 10, '09 at 10:20am

nichodemus

nichodemus

13,696 posts

Knight

Well...unlike me and the thread...I'll post a poem outside the usual genre.


Depression

The world is my wild toy,
And its master it will destroy.
I wander lonesome and tired,
Into my heart a lead bullet has been fired.
One last breathe, and I have expired.
None will ever understand the pain,
So I merely cry and quiver in vain.
The empty echo of death a friend,
A faithful hungry fiend.
My soul it will consume voraciously,
Entering the ethereal realm witlessly.




That, was how me and Jess felt like yesterday. So i conjured it up in five minutes.

 

Posted Jun 10, '09 at 10:38am

zillacutz

zillacutz

532 posts

this world... is but a false site that we take in stride... the only truth is in our fingers that slap the keys... lets talk our lives and our future...

 

Posted Jun 10, '09 at 1:32pm

Moabarmorgamer

Moabarmorgamer

8,674 posts

Haud , non vestri mendum. Is eram coffee's mendum. Is eram tardus is oriens quod vos didn't adepto is. Coffee est a storytelling must. Incendia is quod hire nonnullus espresso mocha.
Hehe. Funny for those who can read Latin
Sorry for any mistakes I made. It's been a long time since my last Latin class.
Don't tell my Latin teacher that I pretty much forgot it though. She'd eat me alive with some mustard and pickles, maybe barbecue style. Slap me on a plate with some bread and BBQ sauce lol
But is there going to be a Guardian Angels 3????????
I really love your stories. I'm pretty good at writing myself and I know a master when I see one. You just need some vocab tweaks. You should really consider a career as an author.

 

Posted Jun 10, '09 at 8:59pm

thisisnotanalt

thisisnotanalt

10,086 posts

Say, the depression poem somewhat fits my mood now. . . .
Well-written. A bit rough in places, but still pretty.

 

Posted Jun 11, '09 at 6:05am

nichodemus

nichodemus

13,696 posts

Knight

But is there going to be a Guardian Angels 3????????


Might be. I need to tweak history a little. So Nazi Germany never falls. Instead of following history itself. Somethng I decided to try out after reading 'Nineteen Eighty-Four'.

Why not a Fascist world?
 
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