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nichodemus
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Since thisnotalt( pretty sure I got the spelling wrong) suggested it, I think I will create a thread just to post my stories. Ok now to find them... *Digs deep into the AMW Section to find his stories*

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thisisnotanalt
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I've been writing stories for school since 1st grade, so that for about 5 years, and as a hobby, I started around February. Just curious

nichodemus
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GA II will be quite descriptive.

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good news, GA II is almost done! *Takes out champagne*.

thisisnotanalt
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*Takes out champagne*

Hmmmm. . .I'll have a nice glass of Veuve Cliquot Brut, please.
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*I cannot wait!*
nichodemus
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Dang, I sure take a longggg time on GA II. But hopefully, it should be done tomorrow. I want to take part in Thoad's competition.

knight_34
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Tomorrow then? I shall return by the time GA II is posted.

knight_34
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Argghh.. I forgot what day it is today! (Where is GA II?)

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wow, I never thought I'd read the whole "guardian angel" story it was amamzing! and I hate to read I tell you.

nichodemus
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Ok I feel bad for breaking promises to you guys, maybe I'll post a teaser.

miguelin11
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hey nich, Sorry if I just read your story now haven't had time great story btw

knight_34
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Ok I feel bad for breaking promises to you guys, maybe I'll post a teaser.


It's okay. Take your time with the teaser. I will not die waiting.
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Wow! You have a lot of talent! I can compare your short stories to ones in other books, and your stories could fit right in with them! Your stories are those of a seasoned author, except for a few things, like some adjectives... and sometimes a sentence goes a bit too long. But other than that, this is professional writing!

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Oh, and I can't wait for GA II! *sorry for spamming, I could have put it on the last post* There isn't any pressure on you though, man. Take your time.

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Yes, these are all great. Some of the adjectives in GA are a bit clumsy, sort of like small bumps in the road, but still, to go by rating, GA gets a 9.5/10!

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Hey mew here! x3

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