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nichodemus
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Since thisnotalt( pretty sure I got the spelling wrong) suggested it, I think I will create a thread just to post my stories. Ok now to find them... *Digs deep into the AMW Section to find his stories*

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nichodemus
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Power doesn't bring happiness? Referring to? The death god one?

Oh, and you won't guess what song I was listening to whilst I wrote it.

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Oh, I wasnt refering to the poem, but a simple twist on a common adage; Money doesnt buy happiness. But reading the death god one, I see its true for that too, even if the adage was directed at you personnaly.

Uh... No, Alt's the Coldplay fan...

Death and All His Friends? Cemetaries of London? Violet Hill? All Coldplay, but if its the new Greenday, then I have no answer.

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Haha...I never listen to Cold Play....

Guess the song? Give up? Alright.

Tearing up my Heart by N Sync

*shock* *scream*

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*shock* *scream*

You dont listen to Coldplay?

But there BRITISH!

*sob*

Nah, jking, but I'm not a big fan of N Sync

nichodemus
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Well...I listen to other British bands. And it's amazing I can write about death when I'm listening to NSYNC.

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Oh Nicho, would you PWEASE tell me when I'm in KOA? Or have you forgotten that you said I would be a *minor* roll. Or have I simply over looked me/him 'cause I/he have/has a differnt name?

nichodemus
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Nah...I just have no time or mood to write it....I'm pursuing other more important things...

And don't worry, you'll be in.

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I'm more of a rabid MMouse fan then a rabid Coldplay fan, though I listen to a to of Coldplay too.

If you can write about death while listening to NSYNC, imagine what you could write about while listening to old-school Modest Mouse . . . .
And I'm lonesome when you're around, and I'm never lonesome when I'm by myself . . . .
And I miss you when you're around, and I miss you when you're around . . . .


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D:

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Techinically...I did the last few verses on Hammerfall...

But when I heard the NSYNC song, I started thinking...hey why not a death poem?

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I wrote a bit more....

Totally blind to all consequences,
No one shall bind their influences,
I will brutally crush all impudence,
And strip bare all mortal senses.

Soon I'll unleash all the awesome power,
Blasphemous rituals and bloody shower,
Thunderbolts striking down King's Tower,
Laugh as slaves prostrate and cower.

Do not question all my ambitions,
I'm breaking down all stony traditions,
Blocking out the restraints and lamentations,
Pour the steel and send the termination.

And the wooden stick I hold with care,
The spirits and shadows it ensnares,
And none, none will I ever spare,
They rejected all I made and shared.

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Update:

Fifth Poetry Contest Entry (Second Place)

W00t, placing for all the times I entered! XD

*Ego* *Ego*

Current Streak:

2 x First
2 x Second
1 x Third

nichodemus
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Okay...no now I'm going to focus more on syllables, not rhyme. So more Haiku and Tanka perhaps..

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Haiku! Maby you should enter my Haiku Contest, no?

nichodemus
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Perhaps. I'll try to squeeze something from my mind.

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Introducing soon....a combo of both Western poems and haikus...

Yes, haiku and poetry.

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