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Dark Reign ~ A Story In Progress

Posted May 20, '09 at 9:54am

Morrighan

Morrighan

102 posts

Hello fellow Armor Gamers. I'm an avid writer and I've started planning a story called Dark Reign. It's a vampire story and it takes place during our time in the city of Seattle. I'll be posting tidbits about it along and along and I appreciate any comments. Thank you. :)

~Morrighan

P.S. If you have any questions feel free to ask.

 

Posted May 20, '09 at 10:22am

Cenere

Cenere

12,941 posts

Knight

I have one.
What kind of vampires are you using (not referring to the awkwardly sparkling ones, but the way they act/"work")?
Mainly because I wonder how realistic you are going to make it, or, to say it in another way, how believable it is going to be.

 

Posted May 20, '09 at 10:56am

nichodemus

nichodemus

11,883 posts

Knight

Mainly because I wonder how realistic you are going to make it, or, to say it in another way, how believable it is going to be.

Perhaps realeasing a short preview and letting us give feedback and advice would help in changing the fundemental problems that crop up in your story.

Anymore information about the story? The description was extremely vague!

 

Posted May 21, '09 at 9:48am

Morrighan

Morrighan

102 posts

Oh, sure. I don't have my stuff with me because I'm at school but I'll post it ASAP. I have a clipboard filled with pieces of notebook paper that contain ramblings at home. I don't actually have a chapter or anything yet though...

My vampires are a combination of all my favorite vampire series that I've read. I think I've covered all the myths about them and I've created my own special twist.

Don't worry Cenere, mine don't sparkle. Edward looked sucky in the movie anway. I imagined him WAY different, if you're talking about Twilight, that is.

 

Posted May 21, '09 at 10:04am

nichodemus

nichodemus

11,883 posts

Knight

So a return to good old traditional ones? Instead of the modern New Age ones. Not even scary.

 

Posted May 21, '09 at 10:08am

Morrighan

Morrighan

102 posts

So a return to good old traditional ones?

Not back to the days of Dracula, if thats what you're thinking. What do you mean by New Age one's?

 

Posted May 21, '09 at 10:14am

WackWeeper

WackWeeper

180 posts

i hope its not like twilight, and if it isn't, then i'll be looking forward to your story...

by the way, i write stories too... :)

 

Posted May 21, '09 at 10:16am

Morrighan

Morrighan

102 posts

i hope its not like twilight, and if it isn't, then i'll be looking forward to your story...

I used to like Twilight, but now I don't. Twilight was the best out of all four books, in my opinion.

by the way, i write stories too... :)

What kind do you write?

 

Posted May 21, '09 at 10:19am

thiswontwork

thiswontwork

110 posts

Best time to write Vampyre stories =P
Looking forward to see if yours different.

 

Posted May 21, '09 at 10:23am

Morrighan

Morrighan

102 posts

Best time to write Vampyre stories =P
Looking forward to see if yours different.

Thanks! I appreciate it. :)

 
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