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Morrighan
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Hello fellow Armor Gamers. I'm an avid writer and I've started planning a story called Dark Reign. It's a vampire story and it takes place during our time in the city of Seattle. I'll be posting tidbits about it along and along and I appreciate any comments. Thank you.

~Morrighan

P.S. If you have any questions feel free to ask.

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I have one.
What kind of vampires are you using (not referring to the awkwardly sparkling ones, but the way they act/"work")?
Mainly because I wonder how realistic you are going to make it, or, to say it in another way, how believable it is going to be.

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Mainly because I wonder how realistic you are going to make it, or, to say it in another way, how believable it is going to be.


Perhaps realeasing a short preview and letting us give feedback and advice would help in changing the fundemental problems that crop up in your story.

Anymore information about the story? The description was extremely vague!
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Oh, sure. I don't have my stuff with me because I'm at school but I'll post it ASAP. I have a clipboard filled with pieces of notebook paper that contain ramblings at home. I don't actually have a chapter or anything yet though...

My vampires are a combination of all my favorite vampire series that I've read. I think I've covered all the myths about them and I've created my own special twist.

Don't worry Cenere, mine don't sparkle. Edward looked sucky in the movie anway. I imagined him WAY different, if you're talking about Twilight, that is.

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So a return to good old traditional ones? Instead of the modern New Age ones. Not even scary.

Morrighan
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So a return to good old traditional ones?


Not back to the days of Dracula, if thats what you're thinking. What do you mean by New Age one's?
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i hope its not like twilight, and if it isn't, then i'll be looking forward to your story...

by the way, i write stories too...

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i hope its not like twilight, and if it isn't, then i'll be looking forward to your story...


I used to like Twilight, but now I don't. Twilight was the best out of all four books, in my opinion.

by the way, i write stories too...


What kind do you write?
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Best time to write Vampyre stories =P
Looking forward to see if yours different.

Morrighan
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Best time to write Vampyre stories =P
Looking forward to see if yours different.


Thanks! I appreciate it.
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New Age as in...Twilight vampires.

I write too. Mystery and supernatural stories.

Morrighan
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New Age as in...Twilight vampires.


Mine are New Age then. I'm basing mine off a combination of the House of Night series and Vampire Academy series. I don't know if you've ever heard of them...

I write too. Mystery and supernatural stories.


Thats neat. Do you have a topic on here with some of your work?
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Yep I do. Three stories so far.

Nich's Tales Of Mystery and Terror

Morrighan
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Yep I do. Three stories so far.


Sweetness. I'll check them out when I can.
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Hey I've got some background info here. Not on the vampires, but where the story takes place.

Dark Reign takes place in Seattle at Nyx Academy. Nyx Academy is a K-12th school for all vampires. They are located throughout the world. The majority of the story will be taking place here.

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And does the rest of the world know about this rather...vampiric academy?

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