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Posted Jun 5, '09 at 9:52am

jezz

jezz

1,447 posts

Sorry everyone, I thought it was about time I put everything about me here, in this thread. By that I mean everything i've written and ever will write.
I've recently realised that the only creative talent I have is being an okay writer. I would definately not say I'm very good, but I enjoy it and seem to have a knack for it.

So i'll post anything i've done here, be it written stories, poems, lyrics, doodles, etc.

First few works'll be posted in a sec. I'd love to hear your feedback, and if you'll would kindly not post your own works in here, thanks?

 

Posted Jun 5, '09 at 9:56am

nichodemus

nichodemus

11,851 posts

Knight

Of course I won't post my own work...about time you started on eh jezz? I want to see what you can cook up...especially since the Forums seem to be devoidless (sorry Voidy) of anyone but you, me, Zega and some newcomers.

Better go help them out first...

 

Posted Jun 5, '09 at 10:16am

jezz

jezz

1,447 posts

You've got your own thread for that ;)
This probably won't be added to often.. I write down tons of stories in my notepads when im supposed to be sleeping late at night, but I never manage to type them up.
Maybe I will now.. after my exams.

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Right, first let me explain my AG persona.
Here, I am a phoenix.
I'm nearing 208 years old and well.. I should be dying soon.
I have a.. what to call her... a demon?
She's in my head. But she comes to life, literally, in the NES.
Her names Skye. Shes a Gorgon. A medusa with snakes for hair and glowing red eyes. She has a sarcastic personality and has a sick sense of humor, in both senses of the phrase.
I own a baby phoenix. Hes not from me, but I took him. I look after him now. Hes special. Hes not... a normal phoenix.
His name is Xander.
Pictures:
http://i428.photobucket.com/albums/qq1/Cerene_Cerine/jezz.jpg
http://i428.photobucket.com/albums/qq1/Cerene_Cerine/xa.jpg

These pictures were draw by Cenere. Arn't they cute?!

 

Posted Jun 5, '09 at 10:23am

nichodemus

nichodemus

11,851 posts

Knight

And the five other phoenixes that I own...they're giving me one hell of a fun roller-coaster ride here....

More stories? At least after your exams...go study now.

 

Posted Jun 5, '09 at 10:31am

sunnyb

sunnyb

260 posts

Vury nice. I gotta say, I love the pictures. Especially the first one. Looks just like Skye, in my mind.

 

Posted Jun 5, '09 at 10:41am

jezz

jezz

1,447 posts

Yes sir, Lord Nichodemus. As you wish... *bows*

Thanks sunny!
I'll post a couple of mini stories in about an hour.

 

Posted Jun 5, '09 at 11:26am

Zega

Zega

6,544 posts

Xander is cute.... I would love to see you draw him. :)

 

Posted Jun 5, '09 at 11:27am

Maverick4

Maverick4

3,707 posts

looks good :)

once u told me skye was a gorgon, thats almost exactly how i pictured her :)

 

Posted Jun 5, '09 at 1:19pm

DDX

DDX

3,470 posts

*takes out oven mitts*

*pets birds*

:)

 

Posted Jun 5, '09 at 1:40pm

jezz

jezz

1,447 posts

Dan! I thought you were taking out the mitts to start a'cookin' but you really just don't wanna burn your hands ^^
Ooo I need your Armatar...

Xander is cute.... I would love to see you draw him.

Me draw Xander?
Me?
Draw?
I can't draw to save my life xD

I love how everyone thought Skye looked like that! Of course... shes about 3 times my height. Considering i'm roughly 4 foot off the floor.

~New story~
Heres the thing, this is a short little thingy I wrote to start an RPG I made. It's not totally descriptive, a rather shabby attempt for me. But it only took 20 minutes or so.
Sorry if the italics makes it hard to read.

~Realm of Rydanor~
A lone tower stood. Ivy growing so thickly over it that the wood and stone of the tower could barely be seen. A small moat surrounded the bottom of the building. A drawbridge heaved itself down and landed on a dusty path. As the sky churned and grew dark, a man on a grey horse emerged out of the dank darkness within. He wore a sour look on his face and a dull black cloak billowed around him.
He galloped off to the east and arrived at the market in Galladin. This village was just outside Conclave, home to some of the most charming centaurs you could hope to meet. As the man passed, young children leered and grown men made snide comments.
"Get outta it Ryd, you don't belong here and you know it."
The man looked on.
Rydanor was his name. Son of Byronar, once wealthy ruler of Karunan City. Until such a time came when the governors of the North felt the power had gone to his head. They sought to rid him of his kingly status and put their own men in charge, but Byronar would not come quietly.
As Byronar and his family were sleeping, the men came and took him. Byronar awoke and became angry, he fought back. However, in all the commotion, one man fired an arrow into the cluster of wrestling men. There was a shout and all men backed away.
Byronar knelt on the ground, clutching his heart and screaming, "Such an untimely death! My son, you will avenge me!"
He lay still.
Rydanor had been just sixteen when his father died. He was so upset with grief that he had forgotten what his father had asked of him.
Until now, when he looked upon the face of his tormentor and recognised him as the man who had carried the bow.
Rydanor lost control. Leaping off his horse he drew his sword and cut the unfortunate man's head clean off. Several women screamed.
"Father, now is the time for me to avenge you!"
-Two Years Later-
Among the city of Byronar there was much spite and fear. Men and creatures alike would slave over many shrines, temples and crypts for Rydanor the Dark, the powerful ruler of Byronar. Having consumed much hatred and contempt towards everyone who had belittled him, Rydanor had created a dark power so menacing, no being would stand up to his might. He would sent his armies of Golems, Serpents and other merciless beasts to slay innocent creatures who stand in his path. Do no work and you will become snacks for his favourite ghastly minions.

Lulz.

 
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