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jezz

3,337 posts

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Posted June 5, '09 1:52pm UTC

Sorry everyone, I thought it was about time I put everything about me here, in this thread. By that I mean everything i've written and ever will write.
I've recently realised that the only creative talent I have is being an okay writer. I would definately not say I'm very good, but I enjoy it and seem to have a knack for it.

So i'll post anything i've done here, be it written stories, poems, lyrics, doodles, etc.

First few works'll be posted in a sec. I'd love to hear your feedback, and if you'll would kindly not post your own works in here, thanks?

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nichodemus

14,987 posts

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Posted June 14, '09 6:31am UTC

Bah if you don't mind....Nacho is actually me. -_-'

If you want to use the poem for any purposes, drop me a message. Yes I really wrote the stuff.

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kingryan

4,196 posts

Farmer

Posted June 14, '09 7:16am UTC

Spam doesn't exist in the AMW section.

No...Not at all. We stay on topic the whollleee time! Don't we!!

Epic Bum Rash Pikachu FTW!

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Maverick4

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Posted June 15, '09 8:26pm UTC

wow great stuff great stuff!

nice drawings didnt know cenere could draw like that (but im a newbie so waddya expect :P). The Gorgon's pretty sweet

anyways keep it up cuz your alot better than me so people will focus more on your great works than my bad ones :]

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jezz

3,337 posts

Farmer

Posted June 15, '09 8:37pm UTC

Aww... You'd be all over him~

o_0

Bah if you don't mind....Nacho is actually me. -_-'

No...Not at all. We stay on topic the whollleee time! Don't we!!

Audience: Yeeaahhh! *crowd laughing*

We want WaoMod sheet!

Mhmm I don't know whether or not to post it when its finished. Nacho told me not to >.>

anyways keep it up cuz your alot better than me so people will focus more on your great works than my bad ones :]

Thankyou!
Aww I'm sure yours arn't bad :3

~Notice~
*I've got mu WoM sheet to finish. That comes before everything else.
*I've got a story i'm writing. Its a big one. I don't know when i'll be finished, (possibly months from now), but I'm gonna post previews within a few days hopefully.

Jess' Occupation: Full-time Procrastinator
-_-'

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dudeguy45

2,920 posts

Peasant

Posted June 15, '09 8:40pm UTC

Ha! I have finished my WoM! O_O.... mabye i should post it on my profile....

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jezz

3,337 posts

Farmer

Posted June 20, '09 1:50pm UTC

I've got a really crappy poem/lyrics I wrote 18 odd months ago.
Ignore the title if you find it offensive :3

~Your America~

Noises raised in the wind.
Anchors set to sail the world
Engines screeched down to a halt
There is nowhere we wonât go

Echoes of an unknown future
Brave saviors ready to search the pit
Man propped above the ground
Found with his throat slit

Child crying about his monster
But we still donât give a damn
Now our whole countryâs gone under
Do you think weâll ever understand?

Lead our nation with blind eyes
Mute mouths speak of the peace of our world
Deaf ears listen to our cries
But weâre still not getting heard

If we spoke of our salvation
Maybe it will just appear
In the form of fighter airplanes
To take out everything we fear

We have just one problem though
In our new age of fake safety
If we stay indoors weâll be fine
Going outside, you just canât make me

Looking at the burnt out mess
We sent our planes to kill them
All the b**tards are now dead
Sadly that also means the children

We took out all the bad guys
Because of their destructive nature
However we may as well kill ourselves
As we too became that creature

Now we can try to put things right
Using will power not force
So every generation after us
Can be lead down the good course

Put your hands up and we will too
Weâre determined to copy you
Youâve got more to give
And weâve got a hell of a lot more to prove

I suck :3

I've got a really crappy poem/lyrics I wrote 18 odd months ago.\r\nIgnore the title if you find it offensive :3\r\n\r\n[i]~Your America~[/i]\r\n\r\nNoises raised in the wind.\r\nAnchors set to sail the world\r\nEngines screeched down to a halt\r\nThere is nowhere we wonâ��t go\r\n\r\nEchoes of an unknown future\r\nBrave saviors ready to search the pit\r\nMan propped above the ground\r\nFound with his throat slit\r\n\r\nChild crying about his monster\r\nBut we still donâ��t give a damn\r\nNow our whole countryâ��s gone under\r\nDo you think weâ��ll ever understand?\r\n\r\nLead our nation with blind eyes\r\nMute mouths speak of the peace of our world\r\nDeaf ears listen to our cries\r\nBut weâ��re still not getting heard\r\n\r\nIf we spoke of our salvation\r\nMaybe it will just appear\r\nIn the form of fighter airplanes \r\nTo take out everything we fear\r\n\r\nWe have just one problem though\r\nIn our new age of fake safety\r\nIf we stay indoors weâ��ll be fine\r\nGoing outside, you just canâ��t make me\r\n\r\nLooking at the burnt out mess\r\nWe sent our planes to kill them\r\nAll the b**tards are now dead\r\nSadly that also means the children\r\n\r\nWe took out all the bad guys\r\nBecause of their destructive nature\r\nHowever we may as well kill ourselves\r\nAs we too became that creature\r\n\r\nNow we can try to put things right\r\nUsing will power not force\r\nSo every generation after us\r\nCan be lead down the good course\r\n\r\nPut your hands up and we will too\r\nWeâ��re determined to copy you\r\nYouâ��ve got more to give\r\nAnd weâ��ve got a hell of a lot more to prove\r\n\r\nI suck :3

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nichodemus

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Posted June 20, '09 1:52pm UTC

I suck :3

Naw you don't Jess =/ *Hugs*

Great poem! Fine verses....fine verses.
I must learn how to write like you one day.

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jezz

3,337 posts

Farmer

Posted June 20, '09 1:57pm UTC

Thankyou guize :3
Yeah, sorry about the boxes. I forgot it was in Word.

I must learn how to write like you one day.

Don't be stupid!
You're a much better writer.

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thisisnotanalt

9,824 posts

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Posted June 20, '09 3:53pm UTC

I liked the poem <3

I need to develop the focus to write longer poems. . . .

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kingryan

4,196 posts

Farmer

Posted June 21, '09 8:27am UTC

Nice Jess...the squares do really ruin it...

Maybe someone *cough*nicho/adam*cough* will fix it for you....

Good poem though.

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jezz

3,337 posts

Farmer

Posted June 21, '09 2:39pm UTC

Maybe someone *cough*nicho/adam*cough* will fix it for you....

Hmm yeah!
Or maybe I can just *cough*boardyoutodeath*cough**choke*?

I know the squares ruiinnn ittt. Doonn'tt remiiindd mmee!

Thankyou Alt :3

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nichodemus

14,987 posts

Grand Duke

Posted June 21, '09 4:16pm UTC

Don't kill me kay Jess? I fixed it up for you =]

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~Your America~

Noises raised in the wind
Anchors set to sail the world
Engines screeched down to a halt
There is nowhere we won't go

Echoes of an unknown future
Brave saviors ready to search the pit
Man propped above the ground
Found with his throat slit

Child crying about his monster
But we still don't give a ****
Now our whole country's gone under
Do you think we'll ever understand?

Lead our nation with blind eyes
Mute mouths speak of the peace of our world
Deaf ears listen to our cries
But we're still not getting heard

If we spoke of our salvation
Maybe it will just appear
In the form of fighter airplanes
To take out everything we fear

We have just one problem though
In our new age of fake safety
If we stay indoors we'll be fine
Going outside, you just can't make me

Looking at the burnt out mess
We sent our planes to kill them
All the b**tards are now dead
Sadly that also means the children

We took out all the bad guys
Because of their destructive nature
However we may as well kill ourselves
As we too became that creature

Now we can try to put things right
Using will power not force
So every generation after us
Can be lead down the good course

Put your hands up and we will too
We're determined to copy you
You've got more to give
And we've got a hell of a lot more to prove

Don't kill me kay Jess? I fixed it up for you =] \r\n\r\n\r\n--------------\r\n~Your America~\r\n\r\nNoises raised in the wind\r\nAnchors set to sail the world\r\nEngines screeched down to a halt\r\nThere is nowhere we won't go\r\n\r\nEchoes of an unknown future\r\nBrave saviors ready to search the pit\r\nMan propped above the ground\r\nFound with his throat slit\r\n\r\nChild crying about his monster\r\nBut we still don't give a ****\r\nNow our whole country's gone under\r\nDo you think we'll ever understand?\r\n\r\nLead our nation with blind eyes\r\nMute mouths speak of the peace of our world\r\nDeaf ears listen to our cries\r\nBut we're still not getting heard\r\n\r\nIf we spoke of our salvation\r\nMaybe it will just appear\r\nIn the form of fighter airplanes\r\nTo take out everything we fear\r\n\r\nWe have just one problem though\r\nIn our new age of fake safety\r\nIf we stay indoors we'll be fine\r\nGoing outside, you just can't make me\r\n\r\nLooking at the burnt out mess\r\nWe sent our planes to kill them\r\nAll the b**tards are now dead\r\nSadly that also means the children\r\n\r\nWe took out all the bad guys\r\nBecause of their destructive nature\r\nHowever we may as well kill ourselves\r\nAs we too became that creature\r\n\r\nNow we can try to put things right\r\nUsing will power not force\r\nSo every generation after us\r\nCan be lead down the good course\r\n\r\nPut your hands up and we will too\r\nWe're determined to copy you\r\nYou've got more to give\r\nAnd we've got a hell of a lot more to prove

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the_manta

4,536 posts

Peasant

Posted June 21, '09 7:12pm UTC

Jess! At least what genre did you have in mind for jour story?

Zomg! I'm helping someone! There's a strange feeling in the pit of my gut...

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jezz

3,337 posts

Farmer

Posted June 21, '09 7:34pm UTC

Thanks Nacho :]

Errrmmm Manta!
Anything you want!
What are you feeling like writing?!
Perhaps more of a horror?
Fantasy?
Maybe not war. I can't write war. I don't know the facts :P
Give me your ideas and i'll write it tomorrow/next week.

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kingryan

4,196 posts

Farmer

Posted June 22, '09 7:44am UTC

Now how did I guess that someone was going to take out the squares???

Hehehehe!!

Good luck in your exam

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