Wow, good....segment? (Lack of grammar skills attacking, take cover)
I loved the way how Carlie was represented. Like an evil queen, who rules ArmorGames with her servants.
And DragonDevoidless crying? I lol'd.
One thing I hate in interesting stories like this one is.... the waiting!!.
I hope it's something good... or else.... I'll call my bunny ninjas.... and we...will..steal...your....carrots!!!!!!! <_<.
Well, tomorrow I'll drop by to see if you wrote more. And if you like your carrots, you better write more. *Noms a carrot*
Gosh I'm so pathetic.... *Wonders how o kill himself without suffering*