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Inspired by jezz.


You can't beat water. Not with fire. Land will only adsorb it, only to make devastating landslides. Ice only will make water tougher. The Kingdoms try and move it with their tin cans, only making a problem somewhere else. This is why, when i was on the brink of death, i chose water to empower me. Now, loneliness scares me more than death. Without Water, i would be another farmer, soon to be engulfed in floods. The castle can't protect themselves from my immense power, and what many brave knights don't understand, is that, I am immortal. Arrows go strait through me. Sword are useless. Even if they attack me while sleeping in my coastal hut, they can not kill me.

They do not understand why I am ruthless, why I constantly drown out the kingdom. It is because the King betrayed me. I had done him a job, working in his castle, and he treated me like a slave. Denied me ever working for him. So now I must kill him. So no one ever gets shunned like that again.

But I do not only plan my vengeance, with my powers comes forever caring for sea life. I am constantly asked to get a crab out of a fisherman's net or escort baby turtles into the waters.

But one day, i hear a rustling in the trees and out appear 5 heavily armored knights. Each with vibrant flags and horses, they yell "We have come under decree of King Andrew the IV, and are here to kill you." As they approach, I lift my hand up, and with it comes the whole sea behind me. "You prepared to come here with armor, you thought it would protect you, but with one million pounds of water on you, it will only kill you quicker. Back off now, I do not want to kill you. It is the king that i would like to release every shark and lobster on." They looked at each other, and one dressed in royal blue said "We accept you terms." And they whipped their horses and trotted away. I put the body of water down, and sat down. This happens every week or so, and I have become a master in the art of intimidation.

I am also well acquaintance with the sky, and receive messages of the kingdoms doings every so often. On day a dove comes to me and says "The kingdom's army is on its way here with 3 catapults and about 100 soldiers, heavily armed!" I thank the bird, a lay down. About 30 minutes later, I here something of a stampede of animals and see a giant projectile on fire land about 60 yard from me. As i saunter closer into the woods, I see giant catapults firing towards me and 100 knights galloping towards me. I douse the ground with thousands of gallons of water so it is much like shallow quicksand. I fall back, and watch all the steeds get knee-deep in mud. The knight get off their horses, but are stuck too. Now for the catapults. Much of the forest around me is in flames, and more fire balls are coming. I quickly get about 100 square feet of water and throw it toward the catapults. The sheer force breaks them like saplings. The knight have taken off their armor now and are retreating. As for the horses, I will tend to them now. I put out the forrest fire, and take out all the water from the drenched ground. I set them free, and lay down on the beach once again. There is steam everywhere. Like I said, you can't beat water.

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dudeguy45
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Peasant

http://api.photoshop.com/home_07252c3daae341a8af3c49dd483afee3/adobe-px-assets/19051ec35d9c48c7b6696d5823577ea3

I'm goin' fractal.

dudeguy45
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Sorry,

Edge of universe

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You should probably submit to Alt's Fwactal Contest.

the_manta
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Ooh. Those are cool, Guy.

First one seems a little random and bland, but it's not bad. I like the second one.


...I gotta learn to get the hang of Apophysis.

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Here

Electric swirl


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I really like the use of that shade of purple in Electric swirl. It's just a wee bit bland, but it takes up enough space for me to let that slide. This is your best one so far, I think.

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Blood Star

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The new one is very bloody, has a nice vampire-like theme, nice colors, it's wonderful.

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Very good your last one is my favorite. Are you using Apophysis?

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All the way, afro.

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Brain Waves


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A walk in the woods

blisters on my feet
summits on my mind
but I just want to take a seat

sun filtering through the leaves
the thought of industry leaves
birds stop singing

clinging on a boulder
I look around
at the beautiful panorama
under the clear blue sky

Yes, I found peace.

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Soul Pyramid


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Brain waves is pretty unsane. I liked it. Soul Pyramid is good too.

I won't criticize your poem too much because I'm not a poet, but it's pretty good, I suppose.

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Hmmm brain waves could have more depth and volume to it to show the power of the brain. But otherwise the rest are cool

When I finished your poem, after the last line, a kind of guitar solo came into my head. Not a Metal Death Rock kinda thing, but a Jon Bon Jovi kinda thing-acoustic style. That means its good.

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