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Posted Jul 12, '09 at 11:02am

Gregbyte

Gregbyte

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The water story one: Well. It was good-like a narration of sorts. But then at the last paragraph or so it kind of lost its calmness in how I was reading it in my head. I suppose that can symbolise water in its wrath and its kindness, but I don't think you tried to do that. Good-you don't fall into the trap of using more simple and common words like I seem some people do (nice, nice, nice, nice,nice,nice, nice...) Interesting but finally lacks finish.

Btw people talking about improving his grammar, what's he meant to do? Buy a grammar exercise book? I hate that stuff-although it works.

 

Posted Jul 14, '09 at 5:10pm

the_manta

the_manta

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This is dudeguy's link.

I'll check it out after I post it.

 

Posted Jul 14, '09 at 5:11pm

firetail_madness

firetail_madness

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Posted Jul 14, '09 at 5:12pm

firetail_madness

firetail_madness

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How does that fit with the summer theme?

 

Posted Jul 14, '09 at 5:17pm

firetail_madness

firetail_madness

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Oops, sorry for writing the past comment. I thought this was the summer armatars thread XD

 

Posted Jul 14, '09 at 5:20pm

dudeguy45

dudeguy45

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Here.


http://api.photoshop.com/home_07252c3daae341a8af3c49dd483afee3/adobe-px-assets/01e9076faa474f22a614d6a93da25747

 

Posted Jul 15, '09 at 6:26pm

dudeguy45

dudeguy45

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http://api.photoshop.com/home_07252c3daae341a8af3c49dd483afee3/adobe-px-assets/19051ec35d9c48c7b6696d5823577ea3

I'm goin' fractal.

 

Posted Jul 15, '09 at 6:28pm

dudeguy45

dudeguy45

3,038 posts

Sorry,

Edge of universe

 

Posted Jul 15, '09 at 6:36pm

firetail_madness

firetail_madness

21,765 posts

You should probably submit to Alt's Fwactal Contest.

 

Posted Jul 15, '09 at 6:37pm

the_manta

the_manta

4,697 posts

Ooh. Those are cool, Guy.

First one seems a little random and bland, but it's not bad. I like the second one.


...I gotta learn to get the hang of Apophysis.

 
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