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A short poem about my dreams!

Posted Jul 25, '09 at 9:58am

SonnyDude

SonnyDude

233 posts

My Dreams Expressed in this Poem

I wonder,
That there will be a thunder,
From which I will fall
To rise again.

As I will faint,
But not become a saint,
When I will wake up I will see a drain,
But never miss my train,
For which I will use my brain.

When I will open a door,
I will see a furnished floor,
For which I would strive,
And go for a long drive.

This is my dream,
As you dream of eating lots of cream...

Thanx
     SonnyDude~

 

Posted Jul 25, '09 at 10:00am

SonnyDude

SonnyDude

233 posts

What are your dreams??

Try to express them in the form of a poem!

 

Posted Jul 25, '09 at 10:22am

knight_34

knight_34

11,455 posts

As I fall into a deep slumber,
I slowly drift into a realm of great wonder
I close my eyes and there I see,
The immense blackness that surrounds me

Suddenly, with incredible speed
I am thrust into the world of my dreams
There is no sadness nor any grief.
Only joy and great relief.

Then I arise and look around me,
and see that I was merely in a dream
A land of unreality
A land I desperately seek.

*Cough*

 

Posted Jul 25, '09 at 11:05am

SonnyDude

SonnyDude

233 posts

Good knight_34!!!!

 

Posted Jul 25, '09 at 11:10am

knight_34

knight_34

11,455 posts

Good knight_34!!!!

Thank you.

I don't really write poems. It took me sometime to think of that one.

 

Posted Jul 25, '09 at 1:53pm

Sebi

Sebi

436 posts

Both are quite good but I especally like SonnyDudes

 

Posted Jul 26, '09 at 1:19am

SonnyDude

SonnyDude

233 posts

Thanx Sebi!!!

 

Posted Jul 26, '09 at 1:20am

Ernie15

Ernie15

12,548 posts

Knight

I once had a dream I was asleep. Surprisingly, it came true!

 

Posted Jul 26, '09 at 1:27am

SonnyDude

SonnyDude

233 posts

Oh yes??

 

Posted Jul 26, '09 at 1:28am

Ernie15

Ernie15

12,548 posts

Knight

Yes, indeed. That is until I woke up...

 
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