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SonnyDude
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My Dreams Expressed in this Poem

I wonder,
That there will be a thunder,
From which I will fall
To rise again.

As I will faint,
But not become a saint,
When I will wake up I will see a drain,
But never miss my train,
For which I will use my brain.

When I will open a door,
I will see a furnished floor,
For which I would strive,
And go for a long drive.

This is my dream,
As you dream of eating lots of cream...

Thanx
SonnyDude~

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SonnyDude
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What are your dreams??

Try to express them in the form of a poem!

knight_34
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As I fall into a deep slumber,
I slowly drift into a realm of great wonder
I close my eyes and there I see,
The immense blackness that surrounds me

Suddenly, with incredible speed
I am thrust into the world of my dreams
There is no sadness nor any grief.
Only joy and great relief.

Then I arise and look around me,
and see that I was merely in a dream
A land of unreality
A land I desperately seek.

*Cough*

SonnyDude
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Good knight_34!!!!

knight_34
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Good knight_34!!!!


Thank you.

I don't really write poems. It took me sometime to think of that one.
Sebi
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Both are quite good but I especally like SonnyDudes

SonnyDude
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Thanx Sebi!!!

Ernie15
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I once had a dream I was asleep. Surprisingly, it came true!

SonnyDude
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Oh yes??

Ernie15
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Yes, indeed. That is until I woke up...

SonnyDude
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Hey you can rate it as well and post your dreams as well in form of small poems!!

nichodemus
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Erm..erm...kind of like a weird dream...nice short poem, though the rhyme sometimes is a bit weird...and the length of the lines are erratic at points.

SonnyDude
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Ya!! It's a little wierd dream but I thought of it only!!

SonnyDude
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Rate it as well!!

SonnyDude
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Post your poems also!!!

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I dot have any poems at the moment. But I have to say, you should enter the poetry contest.

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