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Posted Aug 1, '09 at 12:58pm
SonnyDude
227 posts
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Posted Aug 1, '09 at 1:20pm
Moabarmorgamer
2,253 posts
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Hey guys don't be too harsh on Sonny. After all, it's an...er...ok story, I guess. It just has a lot of errors and whatnot. But don't be mean just cuz the story isn't great. I mean, it's not like you guys are story gods, either. What gives you the right to criticize him?
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Posted Aug 1, '09 at 8:06pm
VoteSocialist
969 posts
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You all say that some of you don't have a car..
So let me tell you that it was also a story of a boy who wanted but didn't own a car..
It was a general story not an extraordinary one.
Yeah...who wouldn't want a car?
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Posted Aug 1, '09 at 8:09pm
VoteSocialist
969 posts
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Hey guys don't be too harsh on Sonny. After all, it's an...er...ok story, I guess. It just has a lot of errors and whatnot. But don't be mean just cuz the story isn't great. I mean, it's not like you guys are story gods, either. What gives you the right to criticize him?
But his story was awful and he needs to check his spelling and grammar!
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Posted Aug 2, '09 at 12:58am
SonnyDude
227 posts
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To VoteSocialist-
Point any word in the story which was not spelt correst!!
Your Grammar is very weak....
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Posted Aug 2, '09 at 2:05am
Moabarmorgamer
2,253 posts
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Constructive Criticism
Well, Sonny, it's not so much your spelling as your choice of words.
And your grammar is very off. Your sentences are short and choppy.
And the story itself, while having a good morale, was not very good in my opinion.
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Posted Aug 2, '09 at 3:47am
GAGAMEN
2,356 posts
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What gives you the right to criticize him?
-Well who is going to read his stories anyway, it`s like saying you can`t judge and vote for politicians if you are not one, when people write books who is going to pay money and read it anyway, it`s called criticism.
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Posted Aug 2, '09 at 4:23am
VoteSocialist
969 posts
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He has a strong mind of ideas but he conveys them poorly.
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Posted Aug 2, '09 at 5:07am
GAGAMEN
2,356 posts
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For whom was that directed Socialist?
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Posted Aug 2, '09 at 5:11am
hardcore
155 posts
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it's a bit confusing but it seems ok :)
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