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An Emotional Story Part-2

Posted Aug 6, '09 at 7:14pm

VoteSocialist

VoteSocialist

969 posts

Well, I think this would be blown over if you didn't keep agitating everyone here, Vote. Just leave the story be. If you don't like it, just walk away. Not that this is a dismissal, just some advice.
And Sonny, it stings but he is right. You have been getting a little mean with your return comments. You shouldn't fight fire with fire; just report him to a mod and ignore him. Don't get dragged into a fight.

You know what? You didn't even read half of anything I wrote in this entire thread about Sonny's story, you just seem to be agreeing with whatever Jezz says.( Who didn't even actually read what I wrote about the story either ) You are the one who is adding more wood to the fire, not me.

 

Posted Aug 6, '09 at 7:17pm

Moabarmorgamer

Moabarmorgamer

2,251 posts

I posted far before Jezz did, check the other pages.
And actually, I think you might be right. I have better things to do, I'll just go.

 

Posted Aug 6, '09 at 7:20pm

chahinkerknawi

chahinkerknawi

51 posts

well written

I would personally give the car as a present to the father and reward him extra for his honesty

 

Posted Aug 7, '09 at 10:20am

SonnyDude

SonnyDude

233 posts

Thanks chahinkerknawi.

 

Posted Aug 7, '09 at 10:52am

SonnyDude

SonnyDude

233 posts

Now I will be posting my next story..

 

Posted Aug 7, '09 at 10:54am

SonnyDude

SonnyDude

233 posts

Wait!!

 

Posted Aug 7, '09 at 10:56am

SonnyDude

SonnyDude

233 posts

The title will Repent For Something.

 

Posted Aug 7, '09 at 10:57am

SonnyDude

SonnyDude

233 posts

See the next page.

 

Posted Aug 7, '09 at 11:00am

SonnyDude

SonnyDude

233 posts

Repent for something

Once there was a boy from whom his whole family was irritated. He was very naughty and liked to listen bad words and abuses from others. He had a bad habit of stealing. His name was Jason.

He collected stamps from letter cards and sold them at a high rate. Once his father was given policy papers and money of another person. He kept it on the table in his room and went out.

As Jason saw it he tried to open it to see what is in it. When he opened it a huge amount of cash came out. He got very scared thinking that he could be sent to jail. He ran to USA.

But his father got in a problem. He was sent to jail for trying to steal money which he had not done…

His son got very hurt because his father was getting punished because of his faults.

He wanted to repent for this serious mistake. He went to be admitted in the U.S. Army.

Then after 2 years.... He became a general and had a good reputation in the army..

NOW was the time of his repenting. He went in a car to take his father from the jail.

His father came out thinking that what would have happened to his son.. He was seeing many prisoners going with their relatives.. He was feeling very alone.

Then a shining car came towards the jail. His father thought that how lucky that person would be whose son came to take him in a car and I am so unlucky.

When his son stepped out of the car he was surprised and his eyes were filled with tears. He became very happy and his son asked sorry from him and took him to his house RESPECTFULLY............

~SonnyDude~

Comments are Welcome!!

 

Posted Aug 7, '09 at 1:10pm

VoteSocialist

VoteSocialist

969 posts

I knew you had it in you SonnyDude! I always believed in you! This was a great story!!!

 
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