Yes I do critcise TV and film but what does that have to do with critcising a new writer in their writing thread on a gaming forum?

And yes, if you show your work to others you should expect to be critcised for it. But what you said was hardly polite nor fair.

I am, infact, something of a writer and from what I've read, I know how to critcise a little story better than you.

Ooops! I put a "here" instead of a "hear", I'm turing into a SunnyDude! D:

Ooops! I put a "here" instead of a "hear", I'm turing into a SunnyDude! D:

You are so STUPID VOTESOCIALIST, you say that I am weak in Grammar, but first see your's.

Neither you know the spelling of turning nor you copy my name correctly.

Before saying the weaknesses of others first improve your's own. You are a foolish guy who just wants to say bad about othere but himself knows nothing..

Guys, just lay off Sonny! Especially you, Votesocialist. I think you should respect other peoples' stories, especially when you're being just a bit hypocritical about them. Your grammar isn't very good.

And yes, in the story world we do expect to be criticized. But constructive criticism is what Sonny would like. Just being mean isn't going to do anything but give people a reason not to like you. I have said all this before. I figured that when Jess posted about the same thing as I said, you might respect her opinion. But nope.

*angry face*

VoteSocialist thinks that he's the best but he is not..

He says that there were many grammatical mistakes in the story then why doesn't he point out a word which was spelt wrong?

Ok, he's crossed the line. Flag his comments.

That right there tells me you are wrong, bigot.

Excuse me?
What exactly have I said to be branded a bigot by you?

Did you here any one of John McCain's speeches about Michael Moore?

No. I couldn't care less.

Ok, he's crossed the line. Flag his comments.

Yes. He has.

Sonny, if you're sick of VoteSocialist, report him to a mod. Hes breaking AG rules by acting rude, immature and spiteful.

Ok, he's crossed the line. Flag his comments.

Threats are for cowards, comrade. You make me sick.

STUPID VOTESOCIALIST

Did anyone see that? That was a personal attack. I never said he was stupid like he just did to me. Why don't you flag him? I only stated that I didn't like his story but that's too much for you, isn't it? Zega said the story was awful, why don't you read what happened instead of going by what someone else told you?

And yes, in the story world we do expect to be criticized. But constructive criticism is what Sonny would like. Just being mean isn't going to do anything but give people a reason not to like you. I have said all this before. I figured that when Jess posted about the same thing as I said, you might respect her opinion. But nope

You obviously missed the post where I said that I liked the idea what the story was wordy and had bad grammar...

No. I couldn't care less.

That's very of ignorant of you but it was pretty bad I must say.

Sonny, if you're sick of VoteSocialist, report him to a mod. Hes breaking AG rules by acting rude, immature and spiteful.

In that case it wouldn't be hard for me to do the same to any one of you.

Threats are for cowards, comrade. You make me sick.

That wasn't a threat, Vote. I'd already flagged your more offensive comments.
However, if I did offend you in any way(or actually make you sick, lol) then I am sorry. I simply intended to defend a new user from unfair criticism. I suppose I did get a bit too aggressive at times?