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SonnyDude
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Character Of a Person


Once there was a family of a boy, mother and father who lived in a town. They had a horse. They were very poor as they were the only people in the town who didn't own a car. They also had a garage which was in a deplorable state and their horse was an eyesore (Not good looking) Itâs hooves were spread wide apart which showed their poverty and the boy was ashamed of it.

The name of the boy was Jack. His mother was a very good person. She never let them feel that they were poor. She new the secrets of using brightly coloured curtains and painted in the right places. This gave the house a better look. She always told her family members that living on little inculcates moral values and if they had character, it was preferable to wealth.

His father was very generous and very honest. Though he got a moderate salary but he spent half of it for supporting his relatives.


Once there was a gala night of the country fair. There was very excitement as the winner of the Shining Buick(an expensive and a good car.) was going to be announced in the lottery. Time of waiting had ended and the winner was Jack's father.

The whole family was very excited and went to home but Jack decided to come late because he wanted to share his joy with his friends.

But when he returned home he saw that there was no sound of celebration and the house was dark. He was confused.

He rushed to his father to share his joy. But....He was shocked of his father's reaction. When he came to hug his father he pushed him away and snarled at him.

When he asked his mother that was the problem, she answered that his father had bought two tickets. One for his Boss and the other for himself. To distinguish between them he marked a small letter 'K' on ticket no. 348 on it's top right corner. The judges did not saw it and told the name of the buyer i.e. Jackâs father.

As his father was very honest, he was feeling depressed that should he give the car to his boss or keep it with himself as he had bought the tickets?

The boy was small and thought that it was an 'open and shut case'(a problem which can be solved easily). He thought that his father bought the tickets so the car belongs to his father not the boss.

His father was not practical about his family and had made the decision in his honesty. He ringed up the boss and told him the truth.

His boss was Jim Kendrick who was a millionaire but he was selfish and greedy. He owned a dozen cars. Instead of offering the car to Jack's father, he sent two chauffeurs to collect it and compensated for it by giving a box of cigars.

When the boy was small he didn't understood his father's decision but when he grew up he understood that by giving the car to the boss his father had proved that he had more character than his boss...

Thanx for reading
~~~SonnyDude~~~


If you were at the place of the boss, what would you have done?? Comments are welcome!!

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Moabarmorgamer
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Guys, just lay off Sonny! Especially you, Votesocialist. I think you should respect other peoples' stories, especially when you're being just a bit hypocritical about them. Your grammar isn't very good.

And yes, in the story world we do expect to be criticized. But constructive criticism is what Sonny would like. Just being mean isn't going to do anything but give people a reason not to like you. I have said all this before. I figured that when Jess posted about the same thing as I said, you might respect her opinion. But nope.

*angry face*

SonnyDude
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VoteSocialist thinks that he's the best but he is not..

He says that there were many grammatical mistakes in the story then why doesn't he point out a word which was spelt wrong?

Moabarmorgamer
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Ok, he's crossed the line. Flag his comments.

jezz
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That right there tells me you are wrong, bigot.

Excuse me?
What exactly have I said to be branded a bigot by you?

Did you here any one of John McCain's speeches about Michael Moore?

No. I couldn't care less.

Ok, he's crossed the line. Flag his comments.

Yes. He has.

Sonny, if you're sick of VoteSocialist, report him to a mod. Hes breaking AG rules by acting rude, immature and spiteful.
VoteSocialist
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Ok, he's crossed the line. Flag his comments.


Threats are for cowards, comrade. You make me sick.

STUPID VOTESOCIALIST


Did anyone see that? That was a personal attack. I never said he was stupid like he just did to me. Why don't you flag him? I only stated that I didn't like his story but that's too much for you, isn't it? Zega said the story was awful, why don't you read what happened instead of going by what someone else told you?


And yes, in the story world we do expect to be criticized. But constructive criticism is what Sonny would like. Just being mean isn't going to do anything but give people a reason not to like you. I have said all this before. I figured that when Jess posted about the same thing as I said, you might respect her opinion. But nope


You obviously missed the post where I said that I liked the idea what the story was wordy and had bad grammar...


No. I couldn't care less.


That's very of ignorant of you but it was pretty bad I must say.
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Sonny, if you're sick of VoteSocialist, report him to a mod. Hes breaking AG rules by acting rude, immature and spiteful.


In that case it wouldn't be hard for me to do the same to any one of you.
Moabarmorgamer
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Threats are for cowards, comrade. You make me sick.

That wasn't a threat, Vote. I'd already flagged your more offensive comments.
However, if I did offend you in any way(or actually make you sick, lol) then I am sorry. I simply intended to defend a new user from unfair criticism. I suppose I did get a bit too aggressive at times?
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Then you should also flag Zega, he agreed with me that he thought the story was awful. And those were not offensive at all, I made no personal attacks on SunnyDude and he even added me as a friend once. Why don't you flag Sunny for calling me stupid?

Moabarmorgamer
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Well, I think this would be blown over if you didn't keep agitating everyone here, Vote. Just leave the story be. If you don't like it, just walk away. Not that this is a dismissal, just some advice.
And Sonny, it stings but he is right. You have been getting a little mean with your return comments. You shouldn't fight fire with fire; just report him to a mod and ignore him. Don't get dragged into a fight.

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Well, I think this would be blown over if you didn't keep agitating everyone here, Vote. Just leave the story be. If you don't like it, just walk away. Not that this is a dismissal, just some advice.
And Sonny, it stings but he is right. You have been getting a little mean with your return comments. You shouldn't fight fire with fire; just report him to a mod and ignore him. Don't get dragged into a fight.



You know what? You didn't even read half of anything I wrote in this entire thread about Sonny's story, you just seem to be agreeing with whatever Jezz says.( Who didn't even actually read what I wrote about the story either ) You are the one who is adding more wood to the fire, not me.
Moabarmorgamer
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I posted far before Jezz did, check the other pages.
And actually, I think you might be right. I have better things to do, I'll just go.

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well written

I would personally give the car as a present to the father and reward him extra for his honesty

SonnyDude
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Thanks chahinkerknawi.

SonnyDude
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Now I will be posting my next story..

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Wait!!

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