Alright, this is allowed right? If not, a mod can lock it...
Anyways, I'm doing this because I feel that my previous thread for my work is being brought down by *cough* 'lesser' works that I had done without really focusing on the affect(s) it would generate, or simply put, if they were 'good'(because greatness is irrelative). I'll just put the new works that I really work hard on here, along with the previous ones that I view as 'acceptable'(what is really acceptable anyways? What with the world as it is...). Enjoy...
Thanks once again to Nichodemus for encouraging me to make the first thread (I got your name right this time :P, maby you should look at YOUR OP :P). Haha...
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Published: June 15 '09 at 1:10 PM
Rise of the Lycans
By: Mav
And where do they go?
That is a secret no one may know.
Plundering Murdering Lycan Thieves
Who blend with stone
And meld with trees
GLinting eyes and mottled fur
Appear like nightmare
Vanish like smoke
What steals upon the silent air
Razor fangs and hidden claws
A deadly killer lieing there
No one living can hide from thee
O those who tread invisibly
Cross hill and dell, wood and stone
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Published: June 18 '09 at 9:29 AM
Wondering
By: Mav
Sitting here today,
Wondering what price I have to pay.
A though, an idea, its all I want!
But still the words just sit and taunt.
And still, I ask, shall I continue?
Before I chance to offend you?
Words that used to flow quite nice
Now instead have turned to ice.
The inspiration that was my flame,
Has gone out, and i must blame;
Was it fear or lack of skill?
These harsh words oh do they kill
Alas, I know not my fate
And I fear that I may be too late
Tendrils escaping afore they begin
And to this all i say is 'fin'
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(revised edition)
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Published: Jun 22 '09 at 2:41 PM
Uprising
By: Mav
Sitting in the quiet night
I watch them as they pass
Preparing for the final fight
awaiting the command
A silent hush besets us all
Like the quiet before the storm
Wondring what will happen to us all
For we are slaves no more!
Come to exact our deadly fee
Upon our overlords
As we race towards the melee
War cries ringing out
Slashing claw and gnashing fang
The skirmish rages on
The fight for our freedom hangs
By a single thread
Crimson blood staings their milky skin
And gruesome wounds we sport
But the Vampire's line is getting thin
And soon they turn and flee
We give chase with howls of glee
And hunt the Vampire scum
But sadly none of us could see
The trap t'was being sown
We chase them towards a shade glen
We fought with the magnificent thought
That we would surely win
But oh were we wrong
Before we knew what was going on
We were all surrounded!
We had all thought that we had won!
The cause was surely lost
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Published: Jun 22 '09 at 6:39 PM
Something in Nothing
By: Mav
A shadow in the night
No one knows my plight
Muddling my mind
It is everything but kind
It is unique to all
But all of man will fall
Creepy, crawly, skuttling things
Those horrible, ghastly paings
With nothing to fear
But no one will hear
Enclosed in their mind
To be free all you need is someone Kind
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Published: Jun 28 '09 at 5:13 PM
Lost
By: Mav
Turning round and round
I don't know where I am
Hoping to be found
I am lost
To survive is my goal
To die is not
And deep down my soul
Knows that I am lost
Seeking shelter, food, and hope
I wander this lonely place
But soon i sit and mope
Because I am lost.
Wandering round this wood
Wildlife scared at my pressence
This situation is not good
For I am still lost
Yet suddenly in the air
My wildest dreams revealed
A person came that really care'd
I am lost no more
The helicopter that saved my life
Took me to my home
It ended alot of strife
But in the urban jungle...
I am lost
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Published: Jun 28 '09 at 5:38 PM
Up
By: Mav
Standing in line just waiting
The advertisements baiting
Snaring you in like a hungry fish
Saying it is all you wish
Happy thoughts flood through my mind
But soon do I find
That I'm in front of the line
The pilot reassures me that I'll be fine
Rising higher, higher, higher still
My worst nightmare is now fulfilled
In this ballon above the ground
A shred of courage cannot be found
Eyes shut tight
I ponder my plight
Till the pilot says where going down
And soon we begin heading towards the town
With clammy hands and a pale face
I sit and wonder about my case
And when we land and I can leave
I hop off and through the crowd I weave
Looking back to that day
With regret all I can say
Should have I just glimpsed down
I could have seen the whole town...
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Published: Jul 2 '09 at 6:01 PM
Im not buying it...
By: Mav
Billy May's Here!
At the tv I Peer
Sighing outloud at what I hear
You should buy Sham-Wow!
I want to give you a Pow!
Just so i can hear you say ow...
...so you should Buy!
I want to cry
Advertising makes me die
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Published: Jul 6 '09 at 11:05 AM
Lead Rain
By: Mav
On the Western Front
To the East of Normandy
American Troops seek refuge
Against the a'cursed rain
Thunder booms out
But not a cloud can be seen
The Men cower in fox holes
And seek protection from the rain
There home on the front
The holes where they hide
Can be there grave too
If the rain hits them
The thunder gets lounder
Men prepare for the worst
And hope for the best
And pray the rain doesnt come
Death comes quick
To those who are hit
By the rain unawares
And unprepared
Like shrieking pipers
The rain comes
And hits the ground
With a lound boom
Trees explode and
Dirt is kicked up
Where men used to be
A smoking crater lies
Wounded men scream
Cries of 'medic' ring out
And yet the rain still comes
And comes and comes
And then the rain stops
The storm is over
And men sink into their holes
To await the next storm
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Published: Jul 6 '09 at 3:44 PM
Marching On
By: Mav
Dissapointed faces
Stand out like a wart
on the tip of a nose
I give it all I got
But it sometimes isnt
Enough to carry on
Writing all the time
Yet mediocre reigns
Over all my poems
This could be the end
It would not surprise me
If I dont continue this legacy
To re-write history was the aim
But somebody always beats me
Like a worn-out drum
Yet I continue on
Renewing forgotten paths
Instant gratification
But people notice
My poor attempts
And still I write
I write of what
Ever I feel and think
In sickness or health
People leave comments
Good or bad
It all helps to keep me going
I continue forging
Out old trails
And forsaking new ones
To be unique
In this same world
I think I still believe that
Yet all veiw me as the same
Another guy trying to survive
And crashing, and burning
Through the wind-blown ashes
I reneiw my life
Like a phoenix
And the game continues
The anthem still plays
And I still continue this old beat
Like water soiled with oil
I am clear deep down
But muddied at the surface
As a flame dies down
And is forever extinguished
All writers must go
Yet this is not a farewell
As much as past recollections
When the weight of it all was lighter
And we all hope
That people will look back and say
Your just like Nicho, Alt, Jezz(ss), or Gantic
And your name included
Like the ringing bell
Brings you notice
Depressing this sounds
Yet happy at the core
A beacon in the night
Words are immortal
Yet people are not
And the people write the continuing, the immortal
By writing I hope
I can create a legacy
Of my own
And stray from renewing
And to begin forging
New paths
So I shall March On
To the same old beat
And resilient I will be
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Published: Jul 8 '09 at 6:53 PM
Books
By: Mav
Reading a book
Thats got me hooked
It takes me to unknown places
And lets me see brand new faces
Riding along side heros or
In a cafe, watching it pour
When ever I begin to read
Magical images to my mind feed
Where will I go
I do not know
So I open that book
To get Hooked
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Published: Jul 10 '09 at 9:30 PM
Lost and Gone
By: Mav
Growin' inside me
That hated thing
It controled my life
And through fear it reign'd
Emotions outside and
a monster within
The woe's its caused
From them I can't hide
Trying to fix and
Searching in me
It controlled my life
Its demise It could not forsee
The war is waged
My hatred at the boil
Its life is mine
My hands its blood will soil
Lost and gone
That part of me
Its crazed eyes
I will never see
I wont look back
I wont shed tears
Lost and gone...
Now I have no fear
(Authors Note: The poem has no relation what-so-ever to the song 'Dead and Gone')
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Published: Jul 16 '09 at 11:13 AM
A Life In A Day
By: Mav
Thirty Seconds!
Till the gate drops foward
Putting us out on the beach
The cliff-face is silent
No movement seen
Maby they all ran away...
Twenty Seconds!
The tension builds
Whumps of shelling in the background
Ten Seconds!
Then hell is unleashed
On this god-dammed beach
Five Seconds!
The bosun screams out
And still the cliff are silent
Drop!
The gate falls down
And the cliffs come alive
Bullets ping off the sides
And the men in front fall
And the bullets still come
We burst into flame
And jump over the side
To stay alive...a bit longer
Wading through the waves
Like sitting ducks
We get picked off
The tide turns crimson
The bodies float
And we cower behind eachother
Mother! Mother!
Some kid cries out
He soon stops...
A LCT* explodes
Raining shrapnel and
Body parts on us
A man walks around
Holding his disembered arm
He ask us where it is
We make a break
For farther up the beach
Only three of us make it
We race up the beach
And see some men
Pinned up behind a wall
We dive next to them
To avoid getting hit
The guy next to me has no head...
Pshooooooowww!
The Rangers launch there rockets
At the point
Krauts drop grenades
As they climb
Blowing them off the ladders
Dirt puffs up
And yet they still miss us
Behind this wall
A guy dashes over
And dives
And hits a mine
It blows his chin off
And moans out
He's gone within the hour
A day in the life
A life in a day
On Omaha beach