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Posted Dec 15, '12 at 8:43pm

Bronze

Bronze

2,454 posts

So are there too many wrinkled on the cloth, or are they not flowing right? Wrinkles are new to me, it's just trial and error right now.

Leaf is real, because I had to have the actual texture somewhere in the collage. I hated the project, to be honest. I just had to settle for an idea. The leaf tree was about my fourth, and plan D doesn't usually work.

I wanted the red to really standout. I even thought about asking you to add a light emitting from the big blood patch. And I only noticed the head was slim after the image was on my camera. I thought the camera was supposed to add ten pounds, but it did the opposite in this case.

 

Posted Dec 16, '12 at 11:46am

Cenere

Cenere

14,002 posts

Knight

So are there too many wrinkled on the cloth, or are they not flowing right? Wrinkles are new to me, it's just trial and error right now.

Basically, the wrinkles there are, aren't helping making the picture, and the clothing doesn't look like it's falling correctly, perhaps because of the way it has been cut.
But it might be the effect of the rather thick cloth used, so it might not need to be something you should consider redoing at this point.
Clothing is rather difficult to make fall right, and at some point it gets to be more on gefühl than technique. If you are not practised with it, it's easier to go with what looks right rather than what is right.

Leaf is real, because I had to have the actual texture somewhere in the collage. I hated the project, to be honest. I just had to settle for an idea. The leaf tree was about my fourth, and plan D doesn't usually work.

Fair. Everyone has something that just rubs them the wrong way, so it's totally understandable. The idea is good enough too, it's just not well executed, but who can blame you.
You did have a good colour choice, and the ink sketch is neat for this, it is just set off by the use of something realistic, when the rest isn't in the same way.

I wanted the red to really standout. I even thought about asking you to add a light emitting from the big blood patch. And I only noticed the head was slim after the image was on my camera. I thought the camera was supposed to add ten pounds, but it did the opposite in this case.

I guess that is why many artists flip their artwork every so often to see if something is wrong. Gets a new perspective, eh.
Fair enough, though, I guess it's mainly personal preference at this point, because I don't like the mix between the soft, muted shading and lines and then that huge blotch of red in the middle of it all. Though I do appreciate the darker reds where the shading punches through.
It by no means a bad picture, it's just not entirely to my tastes, heh.
(That said, you did do the spots pretty well, they look like a natural spray, so hundreds of thumbs up for that)
 

Posted Dec 24, '12 at 5:47pm

Bronze

Bronze

2,454 posts

Merry Christmas everyone!

http://i584.photobucket.com/albums/ss282/BronzeCAE09/861958C8-B9B5-400E-8A16-7D00A9B54055-1102-000001362FDF0457.jpg

 

Posted Dec 30, '12 at 9:03am

Cenere

Cenere

14,002 posts

Knight

Been watching too much Adventure Time?
Looks nice, good with some humoristic sketchy Christmas art, now complete with penguins.

 

Posted Jan 3, '13 at 1:42pm

meppapza

meppapza

7 posts

Nice work man! I really like your stuff, but I gotta ask; do you also do sprites?

I am developing a game and really need an artist.

 

Posted Jan 19, '13 at 2:05pm

Bronze

Bronze

2,454 posts

Been watching too much Adventure Time?


No, not really. My imagination and style are just similar I suppose.

Nice work man! I really like your stuff, but I gotta ask; do you also do sprites?


I wish I did, but I don't. Sorry.

And here is a painting! My first completed painting too.

http://i584.photobucket.com/albums/ss282/BronzeCAE09/002-2.jpg
 

Posted Jan 26, '13 at 6:17am

dragonball05

dragonball05

1,800 posts

Oo, I like the painting you posted. I like how you mixed the colors in the sky, rather than just trying to blend it, giving those bits of colors a new home to stay in. How come you haven't finished any paintings before?

 

Posted Jan 26, '13 at 1:56pm

Bronze

Bronze

2,454 posts

I don't usually finish for a couple of reasons. I'm impatient. And I don't know the finer techniques to painting, so it usually turns into a trial and error kinda thing.

I got something special for you guys today. Something to celebrate Dead Space 3 coming out soon.

http://i584.photobucket.com/albums/ss282/BronzeCAE09/deadspace-1.jpg

I drew a lot of the finer details on paper and uploaded it on to my computer. I then did the bulk of the shading on MS Paint. I think I blended the to medias pretty well.

 

Posted Jan 26, '13 at 5:14pm

dragonball05

dragonball05

1,800 posts

That looks awesome. I love how the difficult it is to tell that those aren't just shadows, making it even creepier :P

 

Posted Feb 14, '13 at 2:16am

the_manta

the_manta

4,697 posts

Oh my goodness, Bronze. I forgot you were an artist.

And I forgot how good you are.

Lawl, taking precautions after that display in the ASC thread?

Anyway, these are really good! I liked the Lighthouse one the best.


...and I forgot that I actually used to type like this.
 
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