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Haiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Posted Sep 18, '12 at 11:00am

nichodemus

nichodemus

11,854 posts

Knight

Birds break into song,
Delicate spring buds bloom full,
Upsetting winter's calm.

 

Posted Sep 18, '12 at 4:01pm

pangtongshu

pangtongshu

8,241 posts

Upsetting winter's calm.

Uh oh nich...recount your syllables

 

Posted Sep 18, '12 at 10:20pm

nichodemus

nichodemus

11,854 posts

Knight

Thanks.

Birds break into song,
Delicate spring buds bloom full,
Upsets winter's calm.

 

Posted Sep 19, '12 at 2:33pm

kevin8ye

kevin8ye

514 posts

Voices everywhere
Murmurs break the silent air
Abrupt end of words.....

 

Posted Sep 19, '12 at 9:38pm

acmed

acmed

1,921 posts

Since Emp did this one... I'll just do the next judging. Cool?

 

Posted Sep 20, '12 at 6:07pm

kevin8ye

kevin8ye

514 posts

sure..... y not

 

Posted Sep 20, '12 at 11:13pm

shock457

shock457

470 posts

This might be my last day here on AG (hence the word might be).

Silence

I shall cry forlorn.
And without hesitation
I leave in anguish.

To me, this is silence. Although I said I'm leaving you won't know when. Alone...I shall leave.

It was nice meeting all of you. I can't be active (I will be a ninja at times.) My school and life is getting harder for me. Good luck to future Mods and Admins. It was nice talking to all of you. =(

~Shock457, Leader of AG3 Clan, signing out.

(I am still leader as I am making a last gift for all my supporters. It is not guaranteed that I will finish it in time as my life gets harder and I wanted this opportunity to test myself. I want to gain more experience and this is my first step to this goal. Good luck and thank you.) =)

 

Posted Sep 21, '12 at 9:34pm

Maverick4

Maverick4

3,707 posts

With no warning, love has
Left me, it seems, while I slept.
Tears, like raindrops, fall.

 

Posted Sep 22, '12 at 12:03am

EmperorPalpatine

EmperorPalpatine

4,972 posts

With no warning, love has

Syllables.
With(1) no(2) war(3)ning(4), love(5) has(6)

 

Posted Sep 22, '12 at 8:10am

Maverick4

Maverick4

3,707 posts

Without warning, love
Left me, it seems, while I slept.
Tears, like raindrops, fall.