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Posted Sep 22, '12 at 8:10am
Maverick4
3,355 posts
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Without warning, love
Left me, it seems, while I slept.
Tears, like raindrops, fall.
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Posted Sep 22, '12 at 2:17pm
kevin8ye
514 posts
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Without warning, love
Left me, it seems, while I slept.
Tears, like raindrops, fall.
U have a mistake on middle line.
Left (1) me (1) it (1) seems (1) while (2) i (1) slept(1)
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Posted Sep 22, '12 at 3:14pm
EmperorPalpatine
4,114 posts
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while (2)
HowManySyllables, Mirriam Webster, and Dictionary say it's 1. I'll consider it like the word fire, it counts in favor of the participant.
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Posted Sep 22, '12 at 7:40pm
pangtongshu
4,445 posts
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meh
Man..that wasn't even close to the required syllables =p
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Posted Sep 23, '12 at 8:15am
Max000_Extreme
110 posts
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Frog is not a frog
Because if a frog is a frog
Flies will roam no more
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Posted Sep 24, '12 at 12:43am
pangtongshu
4,445 posts
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Frog is not a frog
Because if a frog is a frog
Flies will roam no more
2nd line had 8 syllables. first off. Second off...what does this have to do with Silence?
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Posted Sep 24, '12 at 9:38pm
jeol
3,341 posts
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Spinning midst the void,
He spread his mouth to speak, yet
No air did escape.
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Posted Sep 25, '12 at 9:05pm
Darktroop07
646 posts
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2nd line had 8 syllables. first off. Second off...what does this have to do with Silence?
The fly is making noise and by the frog eating it the noise is killed off.
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Posted Sep 25, '12 at 10:29pm
Skeleton_Pilot
1,023 posts
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Where did the sound go?
This is just ridiculous...
I can't hear nothin'!
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Posted Sep 25, '12 at 10:34pm
killersup10
1,578 posts
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suicide quite
blissfullness covers everyone
eternal silence
Is this a proper haiku?
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