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Posted Oct 1, '12 at 5:14pm
The_Gentlemen
45 posts
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Fear not Lady Death.
Foe Her spirit lies within Us.
Ever,she is Us.
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Posted Oct 1, '12 at 7:31pm
EmperorPalpatine
4,116 posts
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The competition is open,right?
Yes. Yes it is.
Hey just wondering with the word while, does that count as one or two syllables?
The dictionaries say 1, but, like "fire" (faar/fai-yer), I'll count it in the participant's favor. Not sure on acmed's ruling.
Foe Her spirit lies within Us.
8 Syllables.
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Posted Oct 2, '12 at 12:57am
Darktroop07
646 posts
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Don't Fear the Reaper
Acmed don't fear him,
He'll take your soul soon enough.
Meanwhile stare him down.
~Aimed at Acmed thanks for helping with the theme XP.
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Posted Oct 2, '12 at 1:49am
Laughable97
83 posts
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Don't Fear the Reaper
Underneath the eye
Lies a comforting presence
No reason to flee
You'll have to forgive me here. I'm not exactly someone who's done a lot of poetry and I realise I've probably messed up somewhere. :/
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Posted Oct 2, '12 at 8:33am
The_Gentlemen
45 posts
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Fixed:
Fear not Lady Death.
Foe Her spirit lies in Us.
Ever,she is Us.
Thanks to Palpatine for the correction.
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Posted Oct 2, '12 at 9:05am
jeol
3,341 posts
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Silent, courageous,
Did he stand before them - his
Heart shivered with dread.
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Posted Oct 2, '12 at 12:43pm
jezz
1,414 posts
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Don't Fear the Reaper
Death's faithful servants,
Take us in a ghostly haze,
And it is gentle.
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Posted Oct 2, '12 at 5:32pm
killersup10
1,578 posts
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unforgiven death
stealing dealthy souls tonight
forever frozen
Does this follow the 5-7-5 pattern?
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Posted Oct 2, '12 at 6:43pm
pangtongshu
4,451 posts
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Existence beloved
Fearful for the absolute
A darkness of peace
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Posted Oct 3, '12 at 2:21am
nichodemus
10,536 posts
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Pulling Out
Massive death payloads,
Shatters our innocent lives,
Watch them flee far now.
From the eyes of an Afghani civilian. Glad to see the soldiers go. I expect the judge to know why Reaper is relevant....
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