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Posted Oct 6, '12 at 11:59am
Jacen96
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after looking at the them i decided to give it a shot.
Friendship with the reaper
The reaper comes soon
and he wants to be your friend
for deaths are mishaps
are we allowed multiple entries?
~~~Darth Caedus
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Posted Oct 6, '12 at 12:54pm
Salvidian
2,444 posts
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4 syllables.
Our is 2 syllables. Or at least that's the way I pronounce it. Ow-er.
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Posted Oct 6, '12 at 3:18pm
acmed
1,923 posts
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Our is 2 syllables. Or at least that's the way I pronounce it. Ow-er.
Then it's fine homie D.
I like the different takes of the theme. Me likey
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Posted Oct 6, '12 at 10:41pm
nichodemus
10,522 posts
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Our is one syllable for the Commonwealth world. Which takes up the majority of English speakers.
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Posted Oct 6, '12 at 10:46pm
Salvidian
2,444 posts
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Fine, I'll change it then.
Give him your burdens
He's an eternal soul mate
He farms alongside
I don't know anyone who pronounces "our" with one syllable. I can't even imagine how it would sound.
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Posted Oct 6, '12 at 10:55pm
EmperorPalpatine
4,106 posts
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He's an eternal soul mate
Either this is to be spoken with an Australian accent, or soulmate should be one word.
are we allowed multiple entries?
No. You can make as many poems as you want, but only one per user can be submitted for judging. If you make more than one, be sure to note which one is your official entry.
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Posted Oct 6, '12 at 11:03pm
Salvidian
2,444 posts
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Either this is to be spoken with an Australian accent, or soulmate should be one word.
Google and MS Word spell-check says otherwise. Besides, it really doesn't matter, as this is measured in syllables and not words.
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Posted Oct 6, '12 at 11:42pm
Maverick4
3,355 posts
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I'm fine with it, but I'm not sure how acmed will respond.
Poorly, in all likelihood, given how he has a history to use every opportunity as haiku judge to give me a gag critique.
I'm guessing this one will involve AIDs, or homosexuality. Perhaps a lovely combination of both.
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Posted Oct 6, '12 at 11:45pm
ILikeTrains1212
5 posts
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the reaper says hi. he will see you very soon.
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Posted Oct 7, '12 at 12:45am
Laughable97
83 posts
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I don't know anyone who pronounces "our" with one syllable. I can't even imagine how it would sound.
Kind of sounds like owl except without the "L" and a slight emphasis on the "R". At least that's how I say it. Think of when people say "Ow" and add a slight "R" but don't make it sound as if it's another syllable. Kind of hard to explain. :/
Oh, and in the dictionary it is 2 so I don't know why you changed it.
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