Bronze Award: Moabarmorgamer (Moat)
The water ripples
The stone skips across the pond
The frogs leap away
This one is written really quite well, and It reminds me alot of a pond. Though in my opinion, it would have been best it you had tied the lines together. Instead of each line being about a differnt thing, try and make them have something a bit more in common. Okay, I could have worded that better.
*hides*
Iron Award: Poison Arrow
Silent reflections
Distorting, shifting, changing
Scratching the surface
This is really good also. Though it reminds me of a grey, cloudy misty sorta of day, where you sit and watch something for hours, it still talks of a pond. Good job to you too also.
Silver Award: shayneii
Splish, a fish jumps... joy
Bursting, colourful delight
The sound goes, "Gah-ploonk".
This one is alot like some classic haikus from feudal Japan, if you ever bother to look at them. It really reminds me of a pond. Exelente
Gold Award (and also first place): Alt
Ripples Ricochet
round stone changing destinies
An era of thoughts
I have to say, it was reall close between you and shayneii. You both had great haikus; shayneii's resembling a more classic haiku, while yours reflected deeper into the thoughts. So yours won. I would go say get your merit, but, I cant. Oh well, atleast you have a warm fuzzy feeling in you, right?
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And now for those that the above awards cant describe:
1337 Award: GuitarHeroFTW
i liek pondz they iz
very coulourful and they
are made of water
7331!!!!!1!!
Scare-the-something-out-of-me Award: Bronze
The water is still
But I know you sleep under
Ever watching me
Jamie? Theres something in the water...
*gets pulled under*
Something straight out of a horror movie m8...
The 'I could care less' Award: Zega
The pond is a pond.
No ordinary old pond.
It is just a pond
If you dont want to be here, why dont you just leave? Whats so special about the pond that you feel a need to write about it? Hmmm?