Okay, here are the results. Don't be angry with me if you don't like it. And don't think I pick favorites just because I picked you. Additionally, those who ignored the theme, well...read on.
IC4I - 5th Place
Through the corridor
From it's darkness into light
A true victory
I'm confused about this one. I wasn't sure about that little 'it's'. I'm sure 'From it is darkness into light' doesn't sound right.
The Gentleman - 4th Place
I'l fight. Forever.
Thru pain. Thru fear. Fall, never.
Light. Will came. I'm sure.
You forgot the second 'l' in 'I'll' and spelled 'through' as 'thru'. Yep, grammar is good, my friend but good grammar is even better. Doesn't matter how you spell 'through' it's always one syllable so no problem there. Good work though, the poem, though rough and short is very blunt making it more poignant.
Jacen96 - 3rd Place
The War
As this long war ends;
Some fights won, but others lost;
We triumph at last.
Congrats on 3rd place. Odd usage of punctuation, but hey, content matters too. Good work.
jdoggparty - 2nd Place
When all hope is gone
He helps you out the tunnel
Appearing as light
Beautiful premise but the language is somewhat awkward. Haikus are hard to master, but well done anyways. The message is very uplifting.
xXxDAPRO89xXx - 1st Place
The tunnel's frail light
Is the end of a journey.
A well fought battle.
Well worded, impeccable punctuation and grammar. I like how 'frail light' kind of runs together like smooth music. 'End' and 'journey' work well together, the assonance is both symbolically and physically meaningful. Great work! Run, run, go get your merit!!
There you have it. By the way, those are my comments after each submission. They are not an indication of why I picked each one for each place. Those are just some things to be mindful of when you submit again. Good work everyone!
Now...what am I supposed to do? Make another theme?
*looks around furtively*
Let's do.
New Theme: The Thanksgiving Spirit
Let's try a new twist on this one. I'll give everyone plenty of time. Due November 30th. Good luck, minna-san!