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Haiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Posted Nov 13, '12 at 4:53pm

The_Gentlemen

The_Gentlemen

45 posts

Feast of all sizes
Cherish the food, delicous
finger licking good

I'd suggest to capitalize and fix the typo in the second line.

Like this:

Feast of all sizes.
Cherish the food, delicious.
Finger licking good.

 

Posted Nov 13, '12 at 5:18pm

Maverick4

Maverick4

3,707 posts

Thanks and Curses

Once two brothers met;
Their diffences bent one
To serve the other.

 

Posted Nov 13, '12 at 6:05pm

xerox

xerox

308 posts

Ah.. I trough the new contest is "The Thanksgiving Spirit" not "The Thanksgiving Feast"...

The hated one, comes!
I smile warm at what i see.
Welcome and Thank You!

 

Posted Nov 13, '12 at 6:08pm

xerox

xerox

308 posts

^^^^^^^ The haiku is about how on Thanksgiving, the enemies should become friends, and forgive each other.

 

Posted Nov 13, '12 at 6:45pm

xXxDAPRO89xXx

xXxDAPRO89xXx

3,549 posts

Wow, thanks. It's kind of sad to know that though....where has the glory gone? :(

First of all that's WHY the people all left... The idea of a merit drew them and with no merit it seems quite "lame" to them maybe...

But if you bring BACK the merits then the people will flock. ALso sad i didn't get one... :P

 

Posted Nov 13, '12 at 8:19pm

Maverick4

Maverick4

3,707 posts

But if you bring BACK the merits then the people will flock. ALso sad i didn't get one... :P

There in lies the problem; only moderators can give out merits. Its not up to us.

 

Posted Nov 13, '12 at 8:27pm

xXxDAPRO89xXx

xXxDAPRO89xXx

3,549 posts

There in lies the problem; only moderators can give out merits. Its not up to us.

Yes i know... Can't you ASK the mods to bring 'em back? And it's very true if they are back the people will probably come too. ;)

 

Posted Nov 13, '12 at 11:33pm

Gantic

Gantic

6,768 posts

Moderator

Thankful for merits
Or the pride that comes along?
     --A change on the breeze.

 

Posted Nov 14, '12 at 12:55am

xXxDAPRO89xXx

xXxDAPRO89xXx

3,549 posts

Thankful for merits
Or the pride that comes along?
      --A change on the breeze.

Great haiku Gantic :)
And lol --change is on the breeze... *hoping*

 

Posted Nov 15, '12 at 4:46pm

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,342 posts

And lol --change is on the breeze... *hoping*

Keep hoping because it's coming. Change is, not the breeze though. I don't want to be too cold while I work on improvements.

I apologize to all you AG Vets who have come on here complaining about my sorry judging practices. Things have changed. I promise it will be better, at least while I'm around.