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Haiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Posted Nov 13, '12 at 4:53pm

The_Gentlemen

The_Gentlemen

179 posts

Feast of all sizes
Cherish the food, delicous
finger licking good


I'd suggest to capitalize and fix the typo in the second line.

Like this:

[quote]
Feast of all sizes.
Cherish the food, delicious.
Finger licking good.
 

Posted Nov 13, '12 at 5:18pm

Maverick4

Maverick4

6,891 posts

Thanks and Curses

Once two brothers met;
Their diffences bent one
To serve the other.

 

Posted Nov 13, '12 at 6:05pm

xerox

xerox

513 posts

Ah.. I trough the new contest is "The Thanksgiving Spirit" not "The Thanksgiving Feast"...


The hated one, comes!
I smile warm at what i see.
Welcome and Thank You!

 

Posted Nov 13, '12 at 6:08pm

xerox

xerox

513 posts

^^^^^^^ The haiku is about how on Thanksgiving, the enemies should become friends, and forgive each other.

 

Posted Nov 13, '12 at 6:45pm

xXxDAPRO89xXx

xXxDAPRO89xXx

5,958 posts



Wow, thanks. It's kind of sad to know that though....where has the glory gone?


First of all that's WHY the people all left... The idea of a merit drew them and with no merit it seems quite "lame" to them maybe...

But if you bring BACK the merits then the people will flock. ALso sad i didn't get one... :P
 

Posted Nov 13, '12 at 8:19pm

Maverick4

Maverick4

6,891 posts

But if you bring BACK the merits then the people will flock. ALso sad i didn't get one... :P


There in lies the problem; only moderators can give out merits. Its not up to us.
 

Posted Nov 13, '12 at 8:27pm

xXxDAPRO89xXx

xXxDAPRO89xXx

5,958 posts

There in lies the problem; only moderators can give out merits. Its not up to us.


Yes i know... Can't you ASK the mods to bring 'em back? And it's very true if they are back the people will probably come too.
 

Posted Nov 13, '12 at 11:33pm

Gantic

Gantic

10,047 posts

Moderator

Thankful for merits
Or the pride that comes along?
--A change on the breeze.

 

Posted Nov 14, '12 at 12:55am

xXxDAPRO89xXx

xXxDAPRO89xXx

5,958 posts

Thankful for merits
Or the pride that comes along?
--A change on the breeze.


Great haiku Gantic
And lol --change is on the breeze... *hoping*
 

Posted Nov 15, '12 at 4:46pm

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,396 posts

And lol --change is on the breeze... *hoping*

Keep hoping because it's coming. Change is, not the breeze though. I don't want to be too cold while I work on improvements.

I apologize to all you AG Vets who have come on here complaining about my sorry judging practices. Things have changed. I promise it will be better, at least while I'm around.