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Posted Dec 5, '12 at 12:19pm xerox 298 posts	Let me change that to : Cold air passes through... Winter finally is here: Paradise of ice!

Posted Dec 5, '12 at 2:15pm GhostOfHorror 789 posts	"Winter is finally here" flows better, at least in my opinion.

Posted Dec 5, '12 at 5:39pm EmperorPalpatine 4,222 posts	Like a cold area of ice Still too many syllables: Like(1) a(2) cold(3) ar(4)e(5)a(6) of(7) ice(8) Its where I keep all my food "Its" (posessive) should be "It's" (contraction of "It is"). Winter finally is here! If you're keeping that particular phrasing, there should be commas before and after "finally".

Posted Dec 5, '12 at 6:25pm pickpocket 2,951 posts	"Its" (posessive) should be "It's" (contraction of "It is"). Oh please. you know I hardly ever use apostrophes. Paradise of ice It's where I keep all my food Refrigerator Happy?

Posted Dec 5, '12 at 7:06pm Roxxar123 56 posts	The cold air of ice, Brings a feel of paradise Paradise of ice.

Posted Dec 5, '12 at 9:07pm xXxDAPRO89xXx 1,650 posts	It's funny how like everyone (including me) is using Paradise of ice in their haikus... Thats a lucky coincedence ^^

Posted Dec 5, '12 at 11:47pm Roxxar123 56 posts	It's funny how like everyone (including me) is using Paradise of ice in their haikus. Well, it's a perfect 5-syllable phrase. And I thought that we had to use it XD

Posted Dec 6, '12 at 3:28am GhostOfHorror 789 posts	You don't have to do put the words of the theme in your phrase, it's just a guideline on what to write about.

Posted Dec 6, '12 at 6:54pm EmperorPalpatine 4,222 posts	You don't have to do put the words of the theme in your phrase If anything, I advise against it because redundancy is redundant.

Posted Dec 6, '12 at 7:02pm Roxxar123 56 posts	You don't have to do put the words of the theme in your phrase, it's just a guideline on what to write about. I know now. First time posting here, so...yeah. Now I know not to use it...right?

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