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Posted Dec 6, '12 at 7:02pm

Roxxar123
56 posts
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You don't have to do put the words of the theme in your phrase, it's just a guideline on what to write about.
I know now. First time posting here, so...yeah. Now I know not to use it...right?
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Posted Dec 7, '12 at 3:09am

GhostOfHorror
789 posts
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You don't have to "not" use it, I just thought you should know it isn't a requirement.
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Posted Dec 7, '12 at 7:00am

killersup10
1,572 posts
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blistering tundra
beautiful swollensnow flakes
frozen paradise
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Posted Dec 7, '12 at 5:23pm

Maverick4
3,355 posts
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Stoic
I can't be bothered
To even attempt to feel.
Apathy at last!
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Posted Dec 7, '12 at 5:31pm

murasaki9
1,325 posts
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The deliciousness of redundancy isn't lost on me.
In fact, it was quite hilarious. Mav has broken the spell
so there's nothing to laugh about now.
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Posted Dec 7, '12 at 5:43pm

killersup10
1,572 posts
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blistering tundra
beautiful swollen snow flakes
frozen paradise
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Posted Dec 7, '12 at 6:00pm

xerox
298 posts
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Wtf.. Im not saying "Winter,finnaly, is here!" Im trying to show everyone that the winter finnaly after long waiting is here and i try to discribe it with Paradice of Ice
"Winter finnaly is here:
Paradice of Ice"
See? I dont need to put comas after and before finnaly, because if I do it, it wont make any sense......
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Posted Dec 7, '12 at 6:06pm

GhostOfHorror
789 posts
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What about:
"Finally, winter is here;
Paradise of Ice."
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Posted Dec 7, '12 at 7:38pm

EmperorPalpatine
4,089 posts
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swollensnow flakes
You might want to change that to "swollen snowflakes".
See? I dont need to put comas after and before finnaly, because if I do it, it wont make any sense
That doesn't make it any less gramatically incorrect. In this case, "finally" is a nonessential clause and should be seperated by commas. Alternately, you could say, "Winter is finally here" or, "Finally, winter is here".
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Posted Dec 7, '12 at 8:09pm

rayoflight3
378 posts
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That doesn't make it any less gramatically incorrect. In this case, "finally" is a nonessential clause and should be seperated by commas. Alternately, you could say, "Winter is finally here" or, "Finally, winter is here".
"Finally" is not a clause. It contains neither a subject nor a predicate. It only functions to modify "here," so there shouldn't be commas around it. I agree though that the wording is awkward and would flow better if switched around.
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