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Haiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Posted Dec 20, '12 at 6:51am

nichodemus

nichodemus

11,853 posts

Knight

First line missing a syllable.
Second missing two.
Third has one extra.

 

Posted Dec 20, '12 at 6:58am

killersup10

killersup10

1,784 posts

Well, is your Santa Clause such a nice man now?

A bloody soaked shirt
Small armies terrorize them
The fat man in charge

 

Posted Dec 20, '12 at 10:58am

MagicTree

MagicTree

360 posts

@nichodemus: Beware, you might be feeding the trolls. They are hungry!

@Lee_Blade:
Haikus have a format of;

First line: 5 syllables
Second line: 7 syllables
Third line: 5 syllables

Example:
Here's a haiku about haikus;

One: Five syllables
Two: There's seven syllables
Three: Five syllables

 

Posted Dec 20, '12 at 11:02am

nichodemus

nichodemus

11,853 posts

Knight

Better to help anyway. Just in case.

 

Posted Dec 20, '12 at 4:54pm

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,342 posts

First line missing a syllable.
Second missing two.
Third has one extra.

@nichodemus: Beware, you might be feeding the trolls. They are hungry!

Better to help anyway. Just in case.

Hahahaha!! So funny!
*sighs reminiscently.*
I'll go away. But really, that
was funny. :D

 

Posted Dec 20, '12 at 6:25pm

Lee_Blade

Lee_Blade

86 posts

My other new version:

Naughty or Nice?

Nice rhymes with cool ice
Naughty sometimes can be nice
Christmas ice,Christ rise

 

Posted Dec 20, '12 at 9:43pm

xXxDAPRO89xXx

xXxDAPRO89xXx

3,549 posts

You naughty or nice?
Better make up your mind soon!
Or coal you shall get!

>:D

 

Posted Dec 21, '12 at 9:10pm

Maverick4

Maverick4

3,707 posts

Friend, what have you done?
Innocent blood you have spilled,
To placate the crowd.

 

Posted Dec 22, '12 at 2:58am

Lee_Blade

Lee_Blade

86 posts

Friend,what did you said?
I cannot understand that,
Are you feeling sick?

 

Posted Dec 22, '12 at 4:13am

Arceus12

Arceus12

144 posts

Good, good or bad, bad,
If your good nobody cares
But cops will get you

The last sentenceBut cops will get youmeans that if you have commited a crima the cops will catch you