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Haiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Posted Dec 20, '12 at 6:49am

Lee_Blade

Lee_Blade

86 posts

My new version:

Naughty or Nice?
 
Nice rhyme with ice
Naughty sometimes nice
Christmas Ice ,Christ will rise

 

Posted Dec 20, '12 at 6:51am

nichodemus

nichodemus

10,581 posts

First line missing a syllable.
Second missing two.
Third has one extra.

 

Posted Dec 20, '12 at 6:58am

killersup10

killersup10

1,578 posts

Well, is your Santa Clause such a nice man now?

A bloody soaked shirt
Small armies terrorize them
The fat man in charge

 

Posted Dec 20, '12 at 10:58am

MagicTree

MagicTree

243 posts

@nichodemus: Beware, you might be feeding the trolls. They are hungry!

@Lee_Blade:
Haikus have a format of;

First line: 5 syllables
Second line: 7 syllables
Third line: 5 syllables

Example:
Here's a haiku about haikus;

One: Five syllables
Two: There's seven syllables
Three: Five syllables

 

Posted Dec 20, '12 at 11:02am

nichodemus

nichodemus

10,581 posts

Better to help anyway. Just in case.

 

Posted Dec 20, '12 at 4:54pm

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,327 posts

First line missing a syllable.
Second missing two.
Third has one extra.

@nichodemus: Beware, you might be feeding the trolls. They are hungry!

Better to help anyway. Just in case.

Hahahaha!! So funny!
*sighs reminiscently.*
I'll go away. But really, that
was funny. :D

 

Posted Dec 20, '12 at 6:25pm

Lee_Blade

Lee_Blade

86 posts

My other new version:

Naughty or Nice?

Nice rhymes with cool ice
Naughty sometimes can be nice
Christmas ice,Christ rise

 

Posted Dec 20, '12 at 9:43pm

xXxDAPRO89xXx

xXxDAPRO89xXx

1,647 posts

You naughty or nice?
Better make up your mind soon!
Or coal you shall get!

>:D

 

Posted Dec 21, '12 at 9:10pm

Maverick4

Maverick4

3,355 posts

Friend, what have you done?
Innocent blood you have spilled,
To placate the crowd.

 

Posted Dec 22, '12 at 2:58am

Lee_Blade

Lee_Blade

86 posts

Friend,what did you said?
I cannot understand that,
Are you feeling sick?