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Haiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Posted Dec 22, '12 at 4:14am

Arceus12

Arceus12

144 posts

Oops i ment

Good, good or bad, bad,
If your good nobody cares,
But cops will get you.

 

Posted Dec 22, '12 at 4:33am

nichodemus

nichodemus

12,119 posts

Knight

Wouldn't the your be you're, which would make it more syllables than 7?

 

Posted Dec 22, '12 at 7:25am

Arceus12

Arceus12

144 posts

Nicodemus thank you for correcting my mistake but you're only contains on syllable look at this link
The corrected haiku
Good, good or bad, bad,
If you're good nobody cares,
But cops will get you.

 

Posted Dec 22, '12 at 7:27am

Arceus12

Arceus12

144 posts

corrected link [url=http://www.howmanysyllables.com/words/you%27re.html]

 

Posted Dec 22, '12 at 7:30am

Arceus12

Arceus12

144 posts

Again corrected link http://www.howmanysyllables.com

 

Posted Dec 22, '12 at 8:01am

Lee_Blade

Lee_Blade

86 posts

Be good then you're good
Be bad then you will be bad
Good or bad?choose none

 

Posted Dec 22, '12 at 10:57pm

Lee_Blade

Lee_Blade

86 posts

Be good then you're good
Be bad then you will be bad
Good or bad?choose one

 

Posted Dec 23, '12 at 6:17pm

killersup10

killersup10

1,788 posts

To many friggen wolves on one page, too confused!

Who is judging?

 

Posted Dec 23, '12 at 10:42pm

EmperorPalpatine

EmperorPalpatine

4,984 posts

Who is judging?

Me. The current round ends in 25.3hrs, so get 'em in. Murasaki gets the next round.

 

Posted Dec 23, '12 at 10:57pm

Lee_Blade

Lee_Blade

86 posts

Be good,Christ loves you
Be bad,devils will get you
Good or bad?choose one