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Haiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Posted Dec 29, '12 at 2:38am

nichodemus

nichodemus

11,843 posts

Knight

I will not massage you, but I can take a couple of rounds before my army service starts in February.

 

Posted Dec 29, '12 at 9:22pm

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,342 posts

The new theme for the next round is: Restoration

This round is due: January 5th, 2013.

 

Posted Dec 30, '12 at 4:23am

Arceus12

Arceus12

144 posts

Restore colleague,
This refrigerator.
To it's glory now!

 

Posted Dec 30, '12 at 6:11am

pangtongshu

pangtongshu

8,232 posts

Restore colleague,
This refrigerator.
To it's glory now!

1) are you implying that you, the speaker, work for a repair company? Or did you put colleague to take up syllable space?

2) 4-6-5

 

Posted Dec 30, '12 at 7:01am

Arceus12

Arceus12

144 posts

Pang the colleague part was trying to imply that they work in a repair compagny
Corrected Haiku
Renovate colleague,
This microprocessor now!
To it's glory now!

 

Posted Dec 30, '12 at 11:24am

EmperorPalpatine

EmperorPalpatine

4,971 posts

it's

*its
it's means "it is"

 

Posted Dec 30, '12 at 11:31am

Arceus12

Arceus12

144 posts

Yes.So?

 

Posted Dec 30, '12 at 11:34am

Arceus12

Arceus12

144 posts

Ah it is OK i get i you sugest that i change it's to its.OK why not.
Corrected Haiku
Renovate colleague,
This microprocessor now!
To it's glory now!

 

Posted Dec 30, '12 at 6:28pm

acmed

acmed

1,921 posts

Lord, heal my wounded,
Restore the strengths you've given,
Protect me from harm.

Hey guys

 

Posted Dec 30, '12 at 6:38pm

Freakenstein

Freakenstein

8,092 posts

Moderator

Honey dewdrops morn
gives Green respite 'fore the day
To sparkle with life