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Haiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Posted Dec 29, '12 at 2:10am

EmperorPalpatine

EmperorPalpatine

4,117 posts

My Thanksgivings winner is still not on the page. :)

Fix'd (or at least it should be).

Thanks for judging again~.

Anytime.

Oh, and
IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT THINGY!!!
For me, school starts in a little over 2 weeks. It shouldn't be much trouble because these don't take very long (at least when there are few entries), but I'll be searching for another co-judge again. If you are interested in the position and you'll have the time and can show that you have a decent understanding of poetry and can interpret deeper meanings in it, please massage me, and also send me a message.

 

Posted Dec 29, '12 at 2:38am

nichodemus

nichodemus

10,557 posts

I will not massage you, but I can take a couple of rounds before my army service starts in February.

 

Posted Dec 29, '12 at 9:22pm

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,327 posts

The new theme for the next round is: Restoration

This round is due: January 5th, 2013.

 

Posted Dec 30, '12 at 4:23am

Arceus12

Arceus12

143 posts

Restore colleague,
This refrigerator.
To it's glory now!

 

Posted Dec 30, '12 at 6:11am

pangtongshu

pangtongshu

4,454 posts

Restore colleague,
This refrigerator.
To it's glory now!

1) are you implying that you, the speaker, work for a repair company? Or did you put colleague to take up syllable space?

2) 4-6-5

 

Posted Dec 30, '12 at 7:01am

Arceus12

Arceus12

143 posts

Pang the colleague part was trying to imply that they work in a repair compagny
Corrected Haiku
Renovate colleague,
This microprocessor now!
To it's glory now!

 

Posted Dec 30, '12 at 11:24am

EmperorPalpatine

EmperorPalpatine

4,117 posts

it's

*its
it's means "it is"

 

Posted Dec 30, '12 at 11:31am

Arceus12

Arceus12

143 posts

Yes.So?

 

Posted Dec 30, '12 at 11:34am

Arceus12

Arceus12

143 posts

Ah it is OK i get i you sugest that i change it's to its.OK why not.
Corrected Haiku
Renovate colleague,
This microprocessor now!
To it's glory now!

 

Posted Dec 30, '12 at 6:28pm

acmed

acmed

1,923 posts

Lord, heal my wounded,
Restore the strengths you've given,
Protect me from harm.

Hey guys