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Haiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Posted Jan 9, '13 at 9:27am

nichodemus

nichodemus

12,167 posts

Knight

If you want to make an entry make it with no insults.

A bit blunt, but not really harsh or anything. I'll accept it provided there's no grammar errors.

You know Francis that you cannot win on this round.

Who knows? I can't read the future unless people post!

 

Posted Jan 9, '13 at 10:29am

xxBoogeymaNxx

xxBoogeymaNxx

85 posts

Magical being
Turned into an adult
Now has no powers

 

Posted Jan 9, '13 at 10:31am

xxBoogeymaNxx

xxBoogeymaNxx

85 posts

Sorry for the DP, I changed part of my second line and forgot to compensate the syllable difference. it was supposed to be like:

Magical being
Transformed into an adult
Now has no powers

 

Posted Jan 9, '13 at 11:14am

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,344 posts

You know Francis that you cannot win on this round.

And you decided that? Cool attitude.

 

Posted Jan 9, '13 at 11:22pm

sourwhatup2

sourwhatup2

3,255 posts

Magic can't be seen
It is merely envisaged
Young ones can feel it

 

Posted Jan 10, '13 at 3:25am

Lee_Blade

Lee_Blade

86 posts

Here is my second version:

Black and white what's next?
Even though I'm just a stick,
I could be a trick.

 

Posted Jan 10, '13 at 3:44am

sourwhatup2

sourwhatup2

3,255 posts

Black and white what's next?
Even though I'm just a stick,
I could be a trick.

Plagiarism at it's finest.
Check it. It's called ''The Tricking Wand''

Sigh..

 

Posted Jan 10, '13 at 4:14am

Lee_Blade

Lee_Blade

86 posts

What?
I did not know.
My friend told me that I can win with that haiku.
I did not know he copied it.
I am so sorry.Please forgive me.

 

Posted Jan 10, '13 at 4:18am

Lee_Blade

Lee_Blade

86 posts

My other other version:

Black suit and a hat
Pulls out rabbits on his hat
And a magic wand

 

Posted Jan 10, '13 at 4:40am

sourwhatup2

sourwhatup2

3,255 posts

Either way it wasn't yours to write. He told you it, so technically, at that moment it would of been ''his''. Therefore it's still plagiarism.. Also, stop posting other Haiku's, I'm pretty sure that that last one you actually posted is going to be the only one taken into account.