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Haiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Posted Jan 10, '13 at 4:52am

Lee_Blade

Lee_Blade

86 posts

This is my other other other other version:

You're sleepy and tired
Now you obey my command
Now do what i say

 

Posted Jan 10, '13 at 4:57am

sourwhatup2

sourwhatup2

3,255 posts

5) One Submission per user

Please go back to the 1st page.. You already broke 2 rules.

 

Posted Jan 10, '13 at 8:12am

nichodemus

nichodemus

12,164 posts

Knight

Just write one and submit it as a final piece.

 

Posted Jan 10, '13 at 7:36pm

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,344 posts

Oh, my, look!
New-kid-on-the-block steps in and tries to own the room. Awkward!

 

Posted Jan 10, '13 at 7:39pm

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,344 posts

Oops. Sorry for double posting. I was going to submit a haiku.
But on second thoughts, I realized that my haiku wouldn't fit the theme. My above comment should give you an idea what my haiku would have been. It's regarding one of my coworkers, but we won't discuss whether I like her or not. Hehe...anyways, good luck everyone!

 

Posted Jan 10, '13 at 7:49pm

nichodemus

nichodemus

12,164 posts

Knight

Might extend this one to get more submissions. Plus work. Gah.

 

Posted Jan 10, '13 at 9:30pm

sourwhatup2

sourwhatup2

3,255 posts

Might extend this one to get more submissions. Plus work. Gah.

If you're busy just add a day or 2. xD

 

Posted Jan 11, '13 at 10:46am

HahiHa

HahiHa

5,076 posts

Knight

The Pyromancer

Mad grey eyes gleam red,
Arcane flames lick at the stones;
The town is ablaze.

Any problems with the syllables? Note that 'grey' is a colour as well as a figure of old age. I also hope the connection to the theme isn't too subtle this time *grumble*

 

Posted Jan 11, '13 at 6:18pm

Lee_Blade

Lee_Blade

86 posts

The Pyromancer

Mad grey eyes gleam red,
Arcane flames lick at the stones;
The town is ablaze.

Wow Pyromancers are my favorite kind of wizards.They are so cool:)

 

Posted Jan 11, '13 at 6:32pm

Lee_Blade

Lee_Blade

86 posts

Sorry guys but this is my last haiku on this round:

Wizards

Summons immortals
Dark magics to destroy men
Men fear all wizards