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Posted Jan 10, '13 at 4:40am
sourwhatup2
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Either way it wasn't yours to write. He told you it, so technically, at that moment it would of been ''his''. Therefore it's still plagiarism.. Also, stop posting other Haiku's, I'm pretty sure that that last one you actually posted is going to be the only one taken into account.
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Posted Jan 10, '13 at 4:52am
Lee_Blade
86 posts
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This is my other other other other version:
You're sleepy and tired
Now you obey my command
Now do what i say
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Posted Jan 10, '13 at 4:57am
sourwhatup2
3,161 posts
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5) One Submission per user
Please go back to the 1st page.. You already broke 2 rules.
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Posted Jan 10, '13 at 8:12am
nichodemus
10,518 posts
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Just write one and submit it as a final piece.
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Posted Jan 10, '13 at 7:36pm
murasaki9
1,327 posts
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Oh, my, look!
New-kid-on-the-block steps in and tries to own the room. Awkward!
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Posted Jan 10, '13 at 7:39pm
murasaki9
1,327 posts
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Oops. Sorry for double posting. I was going to submit a haiku.
But on second thoughts, I realized that my haiku wouldn't fit the theme. My above comment should give you an idea what my haiku would have been. It's regarding one of my coworkers, but we won't discuss whether I like her or not. Hehe...anyways, good luck everyone!
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Posted Jan 10, '13 at 7:49pm
nichodemus
10,518 posts
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Might extend this one to get more submissions. Plus work. Gah.
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Posted Jan 10, '13 at 9:30pm
sourwhatup2
3,161 posts
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Might extend this one to get more submissions. Plus work. Gah.
If you're busy just add a day or 2. xD
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Posted Jan 11, '13 at 10:46am
HahiHa
4,224 posts
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The Pyromancer
Mad grey eyes gleam red,
Arcane flames lick at the stones;
The town is ablaze.
Any problems with the syllables? Note that 'grey' is a colour as well as a figure of old age. I also hope the connection to the theme isn't too subtle this time *grumble*
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Posted Jan 11, '13 at 6:18pm
Lee_Blade
86 posts
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The Pyromancer
Mad grey eyes gleam red,
Arcane flames lick at the stones;
The town is ablaze.
Wow Pyromancers are my favorite kind of wizards.They are so cool:)
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