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Haiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Posted Sep 2, '09 at 5:06pm

Maverick4

Maverick4

3,707 posts

@ sourwhatup:

Poison apple right? Just to makesure, its 'A Fruit Tree'. I would try and signify the whole 'Fruit' thing.

 

Posted Sep 2, '09 at 5:10pm

sourwhatup2

sourwhatup2

3,255 posts

Poison fruit Yh xD

 

Posted Sep 2, '09 at 5:27pm

dudeguy45

dudeguy45

2,594 posts

A haven in hell
green moss creeping up soft bark
Succulent fruit

I like the first line best.

 

Posted Sep 2, '09 at 5:54pm

parrot657

parrot657

880 posts

There outside the house
Is a fruit tree on the yard
With lotsa mangos...

lol. will modify the last line later :P.

 

Posted Sep 2, '09 at 5:55pm

Pois0nArr0w

Pois0nArr0w

1,559 posts

Dudeguy, your last line needs another syllable.

 

Posted Sep 2, '09 at 6:02pm

jdoggparty

jdoggparty

3,314 posts

I picked an apple
Inside was a big surprise
The worm kicked my face

lol. My first Haiku

 

Posted Sep 2, '09 at 6:05pm

dudeguy45

dudeguy45

2,594 posts

A haven in hell
green moss creeping up soft bark
Succulent fruit shines

Edited.

 

Posted Sep 2, '09 at 6:06pm

Moabarmorgamer

Moabarmorgamer

2,251 posts

Beautiful orchard
Clusters of my apple trees
Leaves red, gold, and brown

 

Posted Sep 2, '09 at 6:22pm

the_manta

the_manta

3,006 posts

Life giver to all,
a wise elder among us,
Plentiful and kind

First Haiku. Hope it's good.

 

Posted Sep 2, '09 at 6:38pm

parrot657

parrot657

880 posts

I picked an apple
Inside was a big surprise
The worm kicked my face

lol, this one is great.