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Posted Sep 2, '09 at 5:10pm
sourwhatup2
3,161 posts
Poison fruit Yh xD
Posted Sep 2, '09 at 5:27pm
dudeguy45
2,589 posts
A haven in hell green moss creeping up soft bark Succulent fruit
I like the first line best.
Posted Sep 2, '09 at 5:54pm
parrot657
872 posts
There outside the house Is a fruit tree on the yard With lotsa mangos...
lol. will modify the last line later :P.
Posted Sep 2, '09 at 5:55pm
Pois0nArr0w
1,556 posts
Dudeguy, your last line needs another syllable.
Posted Sep 2, '09 at 6:02pm
jdoggparty
3,260 posts
I picked an apple Inside was a big surprise The worm kicked my face
lol. My first Haiku
Posted Sep 2, '09 at 6:05pm
A haven in hell green moss creeping up soft bark Succulent fruit shines
Edited.
Posted Sep 2, '09 at 6:06pm
Moabarmorgamer
2,253 posts
Beautiful orchard Clusters of my apple trees Leaves red, gold, and brown
Posted Sep 2, '09 at 6:22pm
the_manta
2,990 posts
Life giver to all, a wise elder among us, Plentiful and kind
First Haiku. Hope it's good.
Posted Sep 2, '09 at 6:38pm
lol, this one is great.
Posted Sep 2, '09 at 6:42pm
fluffybunny422
415 posts
Awww my didn't haiku didn't get judged :3
