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Haiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Posted Sep 3, '09 at 10:09am

sourwhatup2

sourwhatup2

3,255 posts

@Meverick4:

I would try and signify the whole 'Fruit' thing.

Danger Lurks Inside is the actual fruit Lol..

 

Posted Sep 3, '09 at 11:51am

fluffybunny422

fluffybunny422

415 posts

O.O I must've been really tired when I made my last hiaku lol

 

Posted Sep 3, '09 at 12:02pm

fluffybunny422

fluffybunny422

415 posts

could this be an entry? :3

Fruit leaves falling down,
down, down, down, down, down, down, *bonk*
ITS A DINOSAUR!

 

Posted Sep 3, '09 at 12:13pm

Zega

Zega

6,544 posts

Lemons and Cherries,
Pineapples and an Orange,
I am allergic.

 

Posted Sep 3, '09 at 3:07pm

fluffybunny422

fluffybunny422

415 posts

Zega, just cus' I'm nice, I'll fix that for you.

Lemons and Cherries,
Pineapples and an Oranges,
I am allergic.

 

Posted Sep 3, '09 at 3:08pm

fluffybunny422

fluffybunny422

415 posts

well your's works :3

and my doesn't so don't start commenting on it lol.

 

Posted Sep 3, '09 at 5:06pm

parrot657

parrot657

880 posts

Zega, just cus' I'm nice, I'll fix that for you.

Lemons and Cherries,
Pineapples and an Oranges,
I am allergic.

Um, you didn't do it correctly either :P.

Lemons and Cherries,
Pineapples and oranges,
I am allergic

 

Posted Sep 3, '09 at 5:33pm

Owen135731

Owen135731

1,813 posts

Who is to say that there's not a genetically modified orange with a unique set of DNA which caused the acid inside the orange to react with the peel, causing a chemical reaction which in turn, created a brand new chemical in which Zega is allergic to? O.O

...you're right.

 

Posted Sep 3, '09 at 5:45pm

Maverick4

Maverick4

3,707 posts

Ahem. *cough* Guys, the theme is specifically a fruit tree, or fruit pertaining to the action of coming from the tree, afore mentioned in teh above haiku, as seen in article 4, subsection J, clause H, Sub-Clause Lima-JJ (plural). Any other haikus, or articles denying the topic of the afore mentioned, and to be found guilty on all charges as previewed by His Judge, Maverick, Six Men, and A lunatic and cat in a shack on a remote island, the guilty party, assumingly reciving the worst and only sentence, will be sentenced to be:

Hung, Drawn, and Quartered, with the remains to be drawn though out the Art and Theatrical Districtk of ArmorLand. Your High Judge Maverick has not spoked, in as much the 6 men, a lunatic and a cat in a shack, who are on a remote island.

So Ends Educational Degree 1.1

Signed: High Judge Maverick, 6 men, etc, etc.

 

Posted Sep 3, '09 at 5:50pm

the_manta

the_manta

3,006 posts

What if it IS about the fruit tree, but just kind of vaguely so?