ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHaiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Maverick4
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A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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Bronze
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First one I guess.

Crafted at the dawn,
Ancient ones guarding over
They blink, we are gone.

LadyTurtleToes
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Alright then, here we go.


The mountian cracks, groans,
His treacherous slope crumbles
Fire burns through him.

Zega
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Where is mine? YOU DIDN'T JUDGE MINEEE!!! D:

Owen135731
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Distracted easily much? :P


No, not at a- Oooo Shiny!

the_manta
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If mine was so awesome, why didn't I place?!

:P Kidding. Good job judging, Shay. You too, GuitarHero.

Mountains?

Scraping at the sky,
contrasting blue horizons,
white snow caps their peaks.

Meh, not my best work.

dudeguy45
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4th! I always knew haven in hell would be awesome.

Owen135731
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That is very tall,
Uttered the blind man to me,
But how could he see?


My entries will never be serious

GuitarHeroFtw
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So if this Contest ever gets a merit prize, can i claim it? (for winning)

LadyTurtleToes
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I would guess you probably have to wait to find out once Zophia decides whether or not there are going to be merits.

Moabarmorgamer
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Awww, got second place.

The snow-capped mountains
I'm trapped, no one to help me
Beauty hides my death

Lol. Morbid Moat makes an appearance! So Shayne, are you judging this round too, or is Mav going to take over again?

shayneii
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@moat: If mav comes back, I will ask him to judge. If he doesn't... then I'll judge I guess.

Zega
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HELLO?!? You didn't judge mine gosh darnit! >.<

dudeguy45
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As I reach Treeline
Cool mountain air hits the soul
The world can't find me

parrot657
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awwwwwwwwww, I didn't get judged D: D: D: D:

GuitarHeroFtw
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Haha, i wonder what i'll come up with when i'm in the mood

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