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Haiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Posted Jul 30, '12 at 10:41pm

daleks

daleks

3,258 posts

I was expecting an Olympic theme...you disappoint me acmed.

A message floating
It tells me a long story
Of a bottled trip

 

Posted Jul 31, '12 at 12:15am

EmperorPalpatine

EmperorPalpatine

4,984 posts

Sent by sea to shore,
Resisting the salty spray,
My salvation sails.

 

Posted Jul 31, '12 at 12:19am

dudeguy45

dudeguy45

2,594 posts

I guess I just don't like how you say things like kick in the nuts, or you like that, idiot. It isn't very nice and I feel its pushing some possible participants away. I know you're trying to be funny, but back off a little bit. You're a poetry judge, not a comedian.

See, it's like good cop bad cop, but replace "cop" with "haiku judge". I'm sure you can figure out who is which. Not to mention he totally COPIED MY JUDGIN FORMAT.

 

Posted Jul 31, '12 at 5:27pm

acmed

acmed

1,921 posts

See, it's like good cop bad cop, but replace "cop" with "haiku judge". I'm sure you can figure out who is which.

If I say I'm bad cop, that makes me honest and good. But if I say you're the bad cop, that makes a liar, and bad...

This is why we can't have nice things.

Not to mention he totally COPIED MY JUDGIN FORMAT.

MAAAAN IM HELPING YALL BRING THE CONTEST BACK TO MERIT REWARDS AND YOU BE TRIPPIN IN MY JUDGING? MAAAAN THATS SOME EFFED UP SHIZZZLE!

 

Posted Aug 1, '12 at 8:46am

lC4l

lC4l

47 posts

Found a strange message
That was inside a bottle
It said, "Drink me, jerk."

 

Posted Aug 1, '12 at 2:52pm

Salvidian

Salvidian

3,950 posts

Carried by kingship
The bestowal of bewitchment
Communication

Bestowal is 2 syllabus and means gift, FYI.
Source. NOT 3 syllabus.

 

Posted Aug 1, '12 at 4:24pm

EmperorPalpatine

EmperorPalpatine

4,984 posts

Bestowal is 2 syllabus and means gift, FYI.
Source. NOT 3 syllabus.

HMS says 3, but it doesn't matter because acmed says it goes to whatever fits.

 

Posted Aug 3, '12 at 11:35am

Salvidian

Salvidian

3,950 posts

Fine. I'll change it.

Carried by kingship
The bounty of bewitchment
Communication

 

Posted Aug 4, '12 at 7:14pm

killersup10

killersup10

1,788 posts

drifting alone
oblivian glass bottle
holy info unfolds

If the first line is only 4 sylables then...

loathing bottles float
messages unraveled there
undone,drowning down

 

Posted Aug 5, '12 at 9:52am

GhostOfMatrix

GhostOfMatrix

11,693 posts

Knight

Cast through shining seas,
letters to a past lover.
Rekindled amor.