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Posted Oct 4, '12 at 7:07pm
waluigi
1,475 posts
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And now for something... completely different.
A melodic riff;
sound of the azure mollusk,
cowbell fills the air.
I'm sorry, I had to with that title. When else could I enter something like this?
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Posted Oct 4, '12 at 7:27pm
Maverick4
3,355 posts
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Your innocence shall
Serve as a shield. Here's a rag;
Wipe your bloodied hands.
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Posted Oct 4, '12 at 11:41pm
TackyCrazyTNT
1,351 posts
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Embrace his pale hands;
The cold is better than
The alternative.
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Posted Oct 5, '12 at 12:41am
EmperorPalpatine
4,106 posts
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Does this follow the 5-7-5 pattern?
Yep.
I expect the judge to know why Reaper is relevant....
Nice.
Your innocence shall
Serve as a shield.
I'm a fan of consonance, but this is a heluva tongue twister.
The cold is better than
6 syllables.
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Posted Oct 5, '12 at 4:03pm
skydragon720
274 posts
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The Reaper
unescapable,
silently following us,
we can run, cant hide.
Does this follow the 5-7-5 pattern?
yes, it does.
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Posted Oct 5, '12 at 4:53pm
Maverick4
3,355 posts
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I'm a fan of consonance, but this is a heluva tongue twister.
Is that a bad thing?
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Posted Oct 5, '12 at 9:51pm
TackyCrazyTNT
1,351 posts
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Failure.
*Embrace his pale hands;
His cold breath is better than
The alternative.
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Posted Oct 6, '12 at 12:19am
EmperorPalpatine
4,106 posts
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Is that a bad thing?
I'm fine with it, but I'm not sure how acmed will respond.
His cold breath is better than
Wouldn't "cold touch" make more sense here?
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Posted Oct 6, '12 at 12:36am
Salvidian
2,444 posts
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Los compañeros agrícolas del segador eterno
Give him your burdens
He's an eternal soul mate
He does our work
Google translate doesn't do a justice. The title translates to "The farming companions of the eternal reaper." Google translate butchers that soooo much.
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Posted Oct 6, '12 at 8:13am
EmperorPalpatine
4,106 posts
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He does our work
4 syllables.
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