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Haiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Posted Oct 17, '12 at 8:37am

EmperorPalpatine

EmperorPalpatine

4,134 posts

"Rise! For freedom!"

4 syllables.

Why? Why should we crumble tyrants?

8 syllables.

 

Posted Oct 17, '12 at 10:27am

The_Gentlemen

The_Gentlemen

45 posts

"Freedom! For Freedom!"
Why? Should we crumble tyrants
for new ones to rise...?

 

Posted Oct 17, '12 at 10:32am

Jacen96

Jacen96

1,200 posts

FREEDOM

Rise! Throw off yokes; of
tyranny and oppression.
Fight for freedom.

~~~Darth Caedus

 

Posted Oct 17, '12 at 10:34am

Jacen96

Jacen96

1,200 posts

woops
freedom is two syllables.

FREEDOM (fixed)

Rise! Throw off yokes; of
tyranny and oppression.
Fight for your freedom.

~~~Darth Caedus

 

Posted Oct 17, '12 at 4:09pm

ProfessorOak

ProfessorOak

776 posts

Hold your sadness in
Another day gone to waste
It becomes too much

 

Posted Oct 17, '12 at 5:37pm

jdoggparty

jdoggparty

3,260 posts

Yay 2nd place. This new theme is interesting. I'll probably think of a creative twist on it.

 

Posted Oct 17, '12 at 9:47pm

skydragon720

skydragon720

274 posts

FREEDOM

Rebel, Resist this,
why should we endure tyranny?
fight, to be free!

 

Posted Oct 17, '12 at 11:45pm

waluigi

waluigi

1,475 posts

That reference in my last haiku was to Blue Oyster Cult's song Don't Fear (The Reaper), Mav. Some I am a lucky man :D I'll think of something to submit, probably later this week.

 

Posted Oct 18, '12 at 3:04am

shock457

shock457

467 posts

Uprising

My heart is in vain,
I shall from from the ashes,
With a pure of heart

 

Posted Oct 18, '12 at 3:05am

shock457

shock457

467 posts

**** autofix...

Uprising

My heart is in vain,
I shall rise from the ashes,
With a pure of heart