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Haiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Posted Oct 23, '12 at 9:50pm

ProfessorOak

ProfessorOak

778 posts

The pond is quite full
Many different fish swim
I watch them swim here

Either this haiku's meaning is extremely deep and obscure, or it has absolutely nothing to do with the theme of uprising.

 

Posted Oct 23, '12 at 11:13pm

shock457

shock457

470 posts

Many different fish swim

Even if it was remotely connected to "Uprising", that line has 4 syllables.

 

Posted Oct 23, '12 at 11:17pm

shock457

shock457

470 posts

...

Sorry for DP.

Either it's me or my lack of sleep because of the horrors of school.

I just made a new Haiku!!!

(Not Official)

Uprising

Wake up now my son,
It's another day of school
Accept the challenge

 

Posted Oct 23, '12 at 11:39pm

Skeleton_Pilot

Skeleton_Pilot

1,281 posts

Even if it was remotely connected to "Uprising", that line has 4 syllables.

Actually it does have 7. I had to look up the number of syllables in "different" to confirm that! =P

 

Posted Oct 23, '12 at 11:55pm

EmperorPalpatine

EmperorPalpatine

4,971 posts

Actually it does have 7. I had to look up the number of syllables in "different" to confirm that! =P

Well it certainly isn't 4. Either way, I won't count it unless he gives a reason why it fits the theme.

 

Posted Oct 24, '12 at 12:58am

shock457

shock457

470 posts

Can't people read my post after my mistake (or who so ever).

SERIOUSLY!!!

 

Posted Oct 24, '12 at 7:12am

lC4l

lC4l

47 posts

Rise up my brother!
Our time to fall is not now.
It is yet to come.

 

Posted Oct 24, '12 at 9:42pm

kevin8ye

kevin8ye

514 posts

Darkness fills the world
Invaders raid the city
All that's left is death

 

Posted Oct 24, '12 at 9:54pm

Skeleton_Pilot

Skeleton_Pilot

1,281 posts

Can't people read my post after my mistake (or who so ever).

Lol... all your post said was that you didn't get enough sleep, but you didn't really specify why it was relevant.

 

Posted Oct 25, '12 at 1:28am

shock457

shock457

470 posts

Cause I made a mistake?!

Read my post Skelton...

(Hahaha, Armatar matches. I want a lightning Armatar cause it is quite a SHOCKER!)