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Posted Oct 23, '12 at 9:31pm
lolsauce
8 posts
Fingers crossed! :)
The pond is quite full Many different fish swim I watch them swim here
Posted Oct 23, '12 at 9:50pm
ProfessorOak
776 posts
Either this haiku's meaning is extremely deep and obscure, or it has absolutely nothing to do with the theme of uprising.
Posted Oct 23, '12 at 11:13pm
shock457
467 posts
Many different fish swim
Even if it was remotely connected to "Uprising", that line has 4 syllables.
Posted Oct 23, '12 at 11:17pm
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Sorry for DP.
Either it's me or my lack of sleep because of the horrors of school.
I just made a new Haiku!!!
(Not Official)
Uprising
Wake up now my son, It's another day of school Accept the challenge
Posted Oct 23, '12 at 11:39pm
Skeleton_Pilot
1,023 posts
Actually it does have 7. I had to look up the number of syllables in "different" to confirm that! =P
Posted Oct 23, '12 at 11:55pm
EmperorPalpatine
4,106 posts
Well it certainly isn't 4. Either way, I won't count it unless he gives a reason why it fits the theme.
Posted Oct 24, '12 at 12:58am
Can't people read my post after my mistake (or who so ever).
SERIOUSLY!!!
Posted Oct 24, '12 at 7:12am
lC4l
47 posts
Rise up my brother! Our time to fall is not now. It is yet to come.
Posted Oct 24, '12 at 9:42pm
kevin8ye
514 posts
Darkness fills the world Invaders raid the city All that's left is death
Posted Oct 24, '12 at 9:54pm
Lol... all your post said was that you didn't get enough sleep, but you didn't really specify why it was relevant.
