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Haiku Contest: Theme- An Autumn (page 37)

Posted Nov 5, '09 at 9:18pm

TerryLasVegas

TerryLasVegas

301 posts

Gold - Knight

At least I got a mention and thats what makes me happy.

 

Posted Nov 6, '09 at 3:35pm

Dudettegal54

Dudettegal54

27 posts

Gold - Serf

Walking down the lane
I see a leaf pile, jump!
Ouch! A fan on curb!

 

Posted Nov 6, '09 at 7:02pm

Ernie15

Ernie15

5,362 posts

Gold - King

Cold, breezy autumn
Leaves rustling, cool winds blowing
Life is just too good

The word "rustling" is two syllables in this poem.

 

Posted Nov 6, '09 at 8:37pm

Bronze

Bronze

1,540 posts

Gold - Knight

The sun moves backwards
Letting the trees take a break
The pines choose not too?

 

Posted Nov 6, '09 at 9:07pm

Ernie15

Ernie15

5,362 posts

Gold - King

The pines choose not too?

Is that a typo or am I just really bad with interpreting writing?

 

Posted Nov 6, '09 at 10:48pm

Bronze

Bronze

1,540 posts

Gold - Knight

Yeah, it should be to.

The sun moves backwards
Letting the trees take a break
The pines choose not to?

 

Posted Nov 6, '09 at 11:38pm

TerryLasVegas

TerryLasVegas

301 posts

Gold - Knight

Warm autumn sunsets
Prettier than day itself
Sweet and beautiful

 

Posted Nov 7, '09 at 5:10pm

Armpit

Armpit

43 posts

Gold - Serf

Words cannot express
My endless love and glory
For an Autumn day

 

Posted Nov 7, '09 at 6:11pm

Owen135731

Owen135731

1,281 posts

Wood - Prince

The leave pile slants up.
As I jump, my feet tingle.
****. It's an ant hill.

 

Posted Nov 7, '09 at 8:13pm

yielee

yielee

278 posts

Wood - Knight

An Ode to Autumn:
This is my Autumn Haiku.
How did you like it?

I couldn't think of anything to write! :D

 
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