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Posted Apr 2, '08 at 5:47pm

Spyro250

Spyro250

198 posts

Im going to start a fiction here.Read it if you like,but dont comment just to tell me you think it sucks.i got stuff like that on my last fic and dont post on my profile to tell me the same thing.Id appreciate it.

 

Posted Apr 2, '08 at 7:27pm

Spyro250

Spyro250

198 posts

Auren's Legacy
Chapter 1:Birth

Auren was still in his egg,but he was about to break free.

Aurenthought)Hmm this is harder than it first seemed...

Crack!Auren's egg's shell opened

AurenT)Yes!Free at last!

His first look outside his shell was that of his egg shelf.He was a red dragon,with 3 horns including his egg horn.Another dragon,his brother,was outside already.His name was Gados.Gados was a blue dragon,a rare color on a dragon.Crack!Another egg opened.

AurenT)A younger brother or sister!

The new arrival was a female.Her name was Maron.

Auren:'I 'ister!

Maroncant talk yet)........

Auren:'O 'ou 'ant talk 'et

Gados:Yes,she cannot

Auren:Okay

Crack!Another egg opened.This was Eranos,another red dragon.

Maron:Hi.

Eranos:'Ey 'Aron.

Auren:Hey any one up for a duel?

Eranos:Me.

Auren:Lets do this

 

Posted Apr 2, '08 at 11:15pm

Spyro250

Spyro250

198 posts

NEXT!The Duel.

 

Posted Apr 3, '08 at 4:13am

Djkgb

Djkgb

705 posts

Bring more! i like it!

 

Posted Apr 3, '08 at 10:37pm

Spyro250

Spyro250

198 posts

Auren's Legacy
Chapter 2:The Duel

MaronT)Ive got a bad feeling about this...

Auren:I dont.

Maron:Oops i forgot dragons can read each others minds...

Eranos:Umm,can we fight yet?

Auren:BRING IT.

Eranos:Okay.NO MERCY!

Auren slashed Eranos with his claws,but failed because of Eranos' scales.Eranos bit Auren's stomach,causing Auren to start to bleed.Auren decided to use his egg horn on the soft spot caused by the hole where the egg sack had been.When he did,he sunk his egg horn into Eranos' soft spot,gutting him.Eranos had just died.

Auren:That was easy!

Maron:How could you?

Auren:Its easy really.Just sink your egg horn into the soft spot and it kills him.

Maron:I didnt mean it that way...

Auren:Oh...

Gados:Spectacular display Auren!Thats my brother!

Mother:Well done,my champion!

Auren:Champion?

Mother:Yes.The winner of the first duel between drakes is called the clutch champion.

Auren:Oh ok.

Gados:Look!The last egg is opening!

The lats drake was copper.Mother named him Dranos.

Dranos:'I 'ib'ings!

Auren:Hi!

Gados:Hello!

New Voice:Hello!

Auren:!

Bakoros:My name is Bakoros.I am a rare gray dragon.

Auren:Mother,can we adopt him?He seems nice enough.....

Mother:Bakoros,are you an orphan?

Bakoros:Yes,I am.

Mother:Then welcome to the family.

Bakoros:Thank you maam,I mean Mother...

Up next New Arrival

 

Posted Apr 3, '08 at 10:56pm

WolfAvatar

WolfAvatar

43 posts

Its wierd.but cool.

 

Posted Apr 4, '08 at 12:30am

Spyro250

Spyro250

198 posts

I dont know if thats an insult or a compliment.

 

Posted Apr 4, '08 at 2:36am

Djkgb

Djkgb

705 posts

Haha, thats good! i like it. Make more please!

its really good, with sense of the language!

 

Posted Apr 6, '08 at 11:30pm

Spyro250

Spyro250

198 posts

Thx Djkgb.

 

Posted Apr 8, '08 at 11:16pm

Spyro250

Spyro250

198 posts

Im gonna change Auren to Auron.